A/N: Hey! I only got one vote on what I should do for this chapter but I'm to go with the Tobias POV chapter because that is the vote. Thank you to FearGodsAlone who was the viewer who posted.
Tobias POV
"I'm waking up to ash and dust, I wipe my brow and I sweat my rust…"I wake up to my phone ringing. I check my clock, it 6:00 am. I look over at my phone and see a picture of Zeke pop up. Ugh. What could he possibly want so early?
I pick up the phone and answer. The second I answered I hear Zeke screaming through the phone.
"Get your ass down to the hospital now!" He shouts. "It's Tris! She fell out of a train and is now in a coma!" What no! Not my Tris! She must have been on her way to Abnegation to tell her parents the news, we are getting married.
"I'll be right over." With that I hang up and run to my closet to get dressed. I quickly through on a muscle shirt and a pair of jeans. I run outside, jump into the car, and hastily drive away.
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I walk up to the lady at the front desk and slam my fists down hoping to scare her enough that she will let me see Tris. The lady jumps a bit, but immediately regains her calm face.
"Yes sir?" she asks in a very peppy voice.
"I'm here for Tris Prior." I say. The lady walks to her computer and types in Tris' name.
"There is no Tris Prior here." She says after searching the files.
"Try Beatrice Prior." I respond. She sighs as if it was the hardest job in the world for her to type in a couple letters and wait for the computer to do all the actual work. She finds her name and scans the file.
"Yes, Beatrice Prior. She has been in coma for about 8 hours." The lady responds. 8 hours? She has been out for that long? "You can wait over there with the rest of her friends." I sigh and walk over to the rest of the group knowing that if I put up a fight I will just get kicked out.
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Tris has been in coma for a week now, and I'm starting to wonder if she'll ever wake up. I never completely lost hope, but as the days past it slowly drifts away. I see a nurse walk out of the room Tris is in. I put up quite a fight to just get the room number she is in. A minute later the nurse walk out looking very excited.
She walks over and says, "Great news! She has awaken from her coma. She can two guests at a time. Who wants to go in first?" I pop out of my seat.
"I do." Then Christina pipes up, "Me two."
"Okay. What is your relationship with Beatrice?' she asks us.
"I'm her best friend." Christina says. The nurse glances at me wait for my explanation.
I take a deep breath. I need to tell the truth, but we haven't given the news to the gang yet. Oh well. "I'm her fiancée." I say. The nurse just nods, but Christina's jaw is almost on the floor.
"Close your mouth or you're going to catch flies." I smirk. She closes her mouth right away. The nurse leads up into Tris' room and I see her sit up. Pain contorts her beautiful face. I notice her examining us with a confused look on her face. I run forward and hug her. But there is something off about the hug, she's not hugging back. I pull away and crash my lips against hers.
Then I feel a horrible pain in my stomach and for a couple seconds I can't breathe. I grunt and pull away and see Tris' fist up. She punched me! The woman I love, punched me!
"Who are you and why the hell were you kissing me, bitch?" she screams at me. What, who am I? Is this some kind of sick joke? Because if it is, it's not funny whatsoever. I stare into her misty eyes, and I know this is not a joke. She really doesn't know who I am.
"What do you mean who am I?" I whisper trying to hold back the tears in my eyes. It's me, Four" she raises her eyebrows asking for more. I take deep breath. Time to reveal my name to two more people. "Tobias, your fiancée" she looks shocked. She starts to franticly shake her head. What? Does she no longer want to marry me?
"No! I don't know you! There is no way that I'm going to be marrying you!" she screams. No. This can't be happening! What is wrong with her? Why does she know who I am? I am furious! I whip around and face the nurse.
"What is wrong with her? Why can't she remember who I am? What did you do to her?" I shout in her face. The nurse just stares at her shoes. What is wrong with this nurse? Why won't she answer me?
She finally looks up after a minutes. She swallows and turns to me. "She has amnesia." That's when Tris passes out. I run over to her to keep her from falling off the bed.
"I am so sorry. If I had known you were her fiancée I would have told you earlier that the doctors suspected amnesia. I just stomp out of the room. Christina runs up from behind me. I forgot she was there.
"I am so sorry Tobias. This must be the worst time for this to have happened. Why didn't you guys tell me that you were getting married?" she says.
I whip around to face her. "Listen to me and listen well." I growl. "You will not call me Tobias ever. I will always be Four to you. Also, you will never tell anyone what my real name it. No one. Do I make myself clear?" she nods franticly. I must have really scared her.
I stomp out of the hospital and into my car. I want to leave this dreaming crushing building. I turn on the radio. Last kiss is playing.
Oh where, oh where, can my baby be?
The Lord took her away from me
She's gone to heaven, so I've got to be good
So I can see my baby when I leave this world
We were out on a date in my daddy's car
We hadn't driven very far
There in the road, straight ahead
A car was stalled, the engine was dead
I couldn't stop, so I swerved to the right
I'll never forget the sound that night
The screamin' tires, the bustin' glass
The painful scream that I heard last
Oh where, oh where, can my baby be?
The Lord took her away from me
She's gone to heaven, so I've got to be good
So I can see my baby when I leave this world
When I woke up the rain was pourin' down
There were people standing all around
Something warm goin' through my eyes
But somehow I found my baby that night
I lifted her head, she looked at me and said
"Hold me darling, just a little while"
I held her close, I kissed her our last kiss
I found the love that I knew I had missed
Well now she's gone
Even though I hold her tight
I lost my love, my life, that night
Oh where, oh where, can my baby be?
The Lord took her away from me
She's gone to heaven, so I've got to be good
So I can see my baby when I leave this world
I slam my fist on the radio. The last think I need to think about is if a my kiss with Tris when I proposed was my last kiss with her. I pull into the Dauntless parking lot and go straight to Tris' apartment. I take out the spare key that she gave me and walk in. I go to her bedroom and fall asleep on her bed thinking about Tris.
A/N: Yay over 1,000 word chapter! I have already started writing the next chapter so that one will be posted either later today or tomorrow. I try to get lots of posts in over the weekend because there won't be very many during school days especial as mid-terms approach. Review!