102Konnichiwa minna-san! Please bear with me, for this is my very first try at actually writing a Naruto fan fiction. I, KazaHaru, would also like for you readers to leave your feedback, constructive criticism, suggestions, at the review box and please no flames! ( your computer/laptop will overheat and we don't want that now, do we? Of course we don't! )
DISCLAIMER: I ABSOLUTELY DO NOT OWN NARUTO/NARUTO SHIPPUDEN! AND IF I DID OWN THE SERIES . . . WELL . . . I'LL LEAVE THAT TO YOUR IMAGINATION.
免責事項：私は絶対にナルトを所有していない!
"Normal speech"
'Normal thoughts'
"Summons talking"
'Summons talking'
Story plot: Neglected!Naruto, Twin sister!Minami, Slight Minato/Kushina bashing, Jinchuuriki!Minami, Cold!Dark!Naruto.
Kuro Cho no Naruto
黒蝶のナルト
Chapter One
Jealousy . . .
Pain . . .
Anger . . .
Ever since Naruto can remember these three emotions have been a constant companion. Never had Naruto experienced love, never been given love, and most likely will remain unloved.
When he turned four years old, Naruto had read a book somewhere that Parental love are given by parents to their children unconditionally but he, too, is just a child, so what could possibly be the problem?
That is when he saw it, Favoritism. His parents prefer his twin sister Minami. That was when Jealousy came knocking and what's he gonna do about it? Let it in, of course!
When Naruto and Minami turned six, Minato and Kushina had dragged Minami into the clan compounds private training grounds then proceeded to train Minami on utilizing her chakra and the basics. Naruto just stood there hidden behind the rose bushes. Once again, Jealousy crawled it's way deeper into his heart when he saw the three of them laughing.
He gripped the rose bush branch in front of him. Naruto did not feel any pain from his hand even when the thorns had broken through skin and causing him to bleed from the deep gashes.
He neither noticed the wounds nor the blood. All his attention was only focused on the scene in front of him. His parents had never had fun with him, much less laugh with him.
Naruto felt his tiny little heart contracting with every beat, it hurts. The pain was so intense that he felt like clawing it out just so it would not hurt anymore.
Then he saw Minato and Kushina engulfed Minami in a hug. The picture of a perfect family. Then the pain doubled. Then, he heard someone knocking and it turns out it was Pain.
Why, hello Pain?! Come on in!
When their eighth birthday arrived, or should we say Minami's birthday. Minato and Kushina had all but forgotten his very existence. everyone had forgotten about him, all but one person. Konoha was once again celebrating the defeat of the Kyuubi no Kitsune and the birth of their Hero.
The Hokage and his family had done the traditional clan visit whenever the clan head's family or in this case, the Hokage's family whenever there are birthdays to celebrate. Of course Naruto just tagged along because he is obligated to show the clan visitation, they returned to the Hokage's mansion/compound.
Usually Naruto would just stay in his room, locking himself inside but for some reason he didn't lock himself inside, opting on sitting in a corner hidden behind a big potted plant at the compound garden where the party was being held.
He watched as various people, villagers, clan members and nobles alike, made their way inside the compound gates which where opened just for this occasion. He watched how everyone worship the ground Minami had walked on.
He wondered if Minami would order them to eat shit, would they do it? Yes? No?
Naruto doesn't really care either way. They could all roll on the ground and die and he wouldn't bat an eyelash. Well, except for one. He would poke his eye out before he wishes him harm of any kind.
Naruto was pulled out of his musings as Minato called everyone's attention and said in his Hokage voice,
"Minna-san Konbanwa! We are gathered here today to celebrate the Birthday of my daughter Namikaze-Uzumaki Minami and I thank you for coming here to celebrate with us. Now as of today, I am naming Namikaze-Uzumaki Minami, as the Heiress for the Namikaze-Uzumaki ichizuko."
Naruto sat there wide-eyed as everyone gave a round of applause for the newly named Heiress. How could they? That was his birthright! How could they give what was rightfully his to someone who was a freak, a jinchuuriki, his abomination of a sister!
Even though he had given up on his parents in them training in the shinobi arts, he had held on the thought that the right as future clan head would be his, but no, they just had to take that too.
Jealousy and Hate continued on festering in his heart and for the third time in his short life he heard knocking, and their it was Anger.
Why hello Anger?! Make yourself at home!
He would make them pay for everything they denied him!
They denied him Love . . .
They denied him Happiness . . .
They denied him his Rights . . .
They denied him Recognition . . .
Oh! They would for it alright! And they would pay for it dearly!
He would destroy everything they considered precious and there is only one that far surpassed their love for Minami and that is Konoha . . .
'Konohagakure no sato will pay for everything that they have done to me!'
And . . .
Uzumaki Naruto never goes back on his word . . .
Hi guys! Ano sa . . . Please review! I really wanna know what are your thoughts about my story. . .
Also I was thinking about mixing this neglect fic with shonen-ai? Yes? No?
How 'bout you guys choose on who the seme is? 'cause I really love Naruto being the Uke in Yaoi romance fics. . . ( giggles) =^.^=
) ItaNaru
) KakaNaru ( does this make him a PEDO?)
) SasuNaru
) NejiNaru
) GaaNaru
) ShinoNaru
) ShikaNaru
)KibaNaru
) IruNaru ( like what?)
Those who would vote on these choices below?! . . . You have guts man!? Here . . . Have a cookie!
) OroNaru ( now this is downright nasty!)
) KabuNaru
) MadaNaru
This story is un-BETA'd
The next update will be in a few days tops or a week from now.
Question:
KazaHaru : what is the purpose of having a BETA anyway?
Ja matta ne!