Hey guys sorry since I said I would update it fast but my net got crappy and every time I try to save this story the net is not connected and also a writing time of just 2 hours a day or sometimes can't due to others in the house using it.

we are planning to change our internet brand this year so there might be a time where I cant publish anything.

so anyhow on with the story!.


Chapter 5 - The Duel


Its lunch time and the cafeteria is empty. with only a handful of students are inside.
and one student is very curious why.

"Where is everyone?" asked student 1 to his fellow classmate.

"Didn't you hear the rumors?,"said student 2 "huh?... what rumors?" said student 1

"oh founder... have you been day dreaming yesterday?" said student 2 "maybe..." Said student 1

As Louise walks down the hall way to the vestry court and was met by professor Colbert

" well hello miss Valliere fancy meeting you here" said Colbert

" ah good noon professor" Louise said as she walks away

" miss Valliere may I ask why you were not in class since yesterday and whats with that coat"
Colbert asked Louise wondering why she is wearing a coat over her school uniform.

" "oh this?, I am wearing it after making some alteration and all" Louise said while pointing out the parts where she made some changes.

Louise also told Colbert that going to class is now pointless that she would be leaving in a few weeks.

Colbert took note that despite her inability to cast magic her intellect is still her strong point and with that he took his leave not that Louise's reason is quite reasonable.

the entire vestry court was packed with students making Louise wonder how come the teachers did not notice this kind of commotions.

"Ah Louise the zero your arrival is expected a while ago, I was starting to think you ran away"
Guiche said while he swing his rose.

" Better late than never, I was just preparing my self to beat you" Louise said with confidence for others to see.

" Well then lets start, I am Guiche the bronze and you will be facing my work of art, go my Valkyries!" Guiche said as he points his rose then the rose petal that dropped summoned a female warrior mad of bronzed came from the ground armed with a spear.

this time its Louise turn and she plans to surprise them all even Kirche who is also there watching on the sidelines.

" I am Louise... the alchemist... and You will be fighting my titan go symbotius!" Louise then took out her symbotius orb and threw it at the ground and a momentary flash came.

As Louise says her name and title the other students were surprise that she called her self an alchemist and she said about a titan which made the students wonder if she is just making things up until Louise took out something from her pocket and then threw it at the ground making a flash.

when the flash ended nothing happened then the other students began throwing insults at her

"Booo... do you expect us to believe everything ZERO!" " your going to lose hard Zero!"
On the side line a blue haired girl was observing as he read her book but was interested in that flash though.

"Is that all for show ZERO" said Guiche with a tone of victory " well if that is ll then prepare for the embarrassment of your life Louise" with that Guiche ordered his Valkyries to attack.

then the whole ground shook making students fall and frightening them. even the Valkyrie stopped on its tracks until a massive hand came out of the ground below the Valkyrie and crushing it within its hands.

"Wha-What is that?" Guiche was surprised that a golem suddenly came from the ground and instantly crushed his Valkyrie.

Every one watching the duel was speechless as a large construct came from the ground and destroying the golem Guiche summoned looking closely they can see branches and leaves on its body but what stand out is the height of the golem.

its height was comparable to a Square class golem that Square leveled mages always summon. this also caught a certain red head in the sidelines.

"Did Louise summoned that? impossible... she could not even cast a spell properly, but this..." Kirche just stood there speaking and asking her self how could the so called ZERO be capable of this level of magic." just what ells are you hiding Louise..."

Mean while the entire crowed bust into confusion and even denying tha fact the she is the one who summoned the golem.

" There must be a mistake here, the zero could not have summoned this" said a student

"yeah maybe she hired a dishonored mage and make him summon this golem... I bet she could not even command it!" said another


Meanwhile in the office...


The head master and professor Colbert was watching the entire scene and ordered the other teachers to observe.

" This is really surprising... the Scion of the Valleire family manage to summon a Square class golem despite her inability to do so" said old Osmond

"But there might be a possibility a 3rd party is involve" said the secretary miss Loungeville (AKA. Mathilda)

" No there isn't my dear Loungeville, I placed detection wards around the school ground and there is no Square call mage in the vicinity of the duel taking place.

" But she summoned a golem out of nowhere this should be brought to attention of the staff " Colbert interrupted

" It may be she is hiding something but for now... *Who would like to bet wich one would win*" Old Osmond said in a happy tone breaking the atmosphere of seriousness.

" Or maybe should send a report to the kingdom about your gambli..." loungville stoped as she saw Old Osmond kneeling with puppy eye. then she snapped...

"You good for nothing geezer! act your own age for Founders sakes!" with that out burst Old Osmond will take a beating from the raging green haired secretary.


Back to the duel


Louise saw every one and everything stood still at the shock they received from her Titan. she then saw Guiche frozen but decided to make him spat out of it.

" Hey Guiche are going to give up or fight" Louise called out breaking Guiche's from spacing out.

"o - of course not! your golem might be large but I have the numbers!" Guiche waved his wand then 20 Valkyries came fort armed with spears and sword.

Guiche then ordered his Valkyries to attack Louise but was met with opposition from the large construct. Louise's Titan did not even flinch when the weapons of the Valkyries but the weapons them selves bent and became blunt after trying to strike the magic infused rock.

this gave the valkyries even more disadvantage not that their weapons are broken and useless to the point it needs to be scraped and then the titan wasted no time crushing and ripping apart those unarmed titans with just its strength and fist.

Guiche saw his Valkyries were being toyed and obliterated he was about to wet himself but an I idea came to him and he focused his willpower and crafted a 12 meter tall Bronzed ordered it to attack Louise's Titan with the gigantic sword that it carries but against the magical fusion Titan only chipped a few rock off the Titan.

Louise was overjoyed that her Titan cam beat up an army of Bronzed Valkyrie. when all the Valkyries were defeated it made the ground trembling as it walks towards Guiche.

Guiche was all but sweating and is about to wet him self then Louise came forward and he wasted no time forfeiting the match.

"I surrender you win so please don't hurt me ZERO!" Guiche said with trembling voice not wanting to face the large construct.

" Looks like I win You double timing idiot but I want to be called by my name or a tittle fitted for me" Louise said pointing at him

"huh what? no way ZERO you may have me at your mercy but everyone here thinks you just hire some noble to do your own tricks... yeah hah tricks!" Guiche said trying to regain his pride and expose Louise.

" hired some noble?... Do your think a Valliere would do something so dishonorable?, well how about I show you that your so called ZERO has become even better than you!" Louise said out loud for everyone to hear.

She then went to scraped Valkyries and then collected the swords and took a few parts off the Valkyries, She then drew a large version of the transmution circle and she began chanting her spell with the materials in the middle of the circle.

The students were wondering what kind of rune is Louise drawing in the grounds soft soil but what made made no sense to them was the chant Louise was casting, It sounded foreign and is some what similar to elven language that they heard on some lessons.

Louise is using all of her strength as she conjures her spell but she felt different, far different than all her training that almost drained her will power but still something is draining inside her, she could feel her body beginning to tire but she ignored it and finished her spell.

After she chanted two large flash came blinding everyone but as the light fades they saw something put of this world. the first one was a golem that was covered in blade even just his body is covered by blade, and the second one was colored in bronze but it has a large axe attached to its right arm.

Louise saw the faces of the students and was glad to see it making her happy.

"what this is impossible... ho-how this your make this! its just impossible" Guiche said out of fear and jealousy

" I said I will show and now you and any of you here could now never belittle be again!"

The entire crowed was speechless with her outburst and her magic, Louise then recalled her titans and placed them in her pouch. She then walked away from the entire crowed leaving a note in everyone's head that she is no longer the Louise they could insult and bully for her inability to cast magic now that she has defeated a fellow mage.


So that's it for the duel and how is my fight scene?