219So I know what a lot of you are thinking. 'Why is she posting a new fic after she told us she wouldn't until the other one is done?' Well the thing is…I'm getting bored of only writing that one fic. I want something else that is up here for all of you to read.
So if you read the A/N that I put up for chapter 19 of 'You are Mine', you would know that I had some fic ideas on there. This was one of them and I decided to post it because this is the one that I have been revising. I wrote like ten chapters and then decided that they were complete garbage. So now the revised chapters are in yet another notebook. The difference is the quality.
So without further ado, I give you the first chapter of my new fic.
WARNING: Rated M for the two L's
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Twilight (I'm only going to put these here once)
(Chapter 1)
BPOV
Running. Running. That's all that I was capable of doing at the moment. My brain refused to ignore all of the fear that was coursing through my body, thus only allowing me the incredible need to run. I could have been running backwards for how much I continuously looked over my shoulder. I know, movie cliché. Sweat was dripping down my face as I pushed myself as hard as I possibly could. I was actually surprised that I hadn't tripped yet. Whatever was chasing me wasn't giving up. I heard maniacal laughter and I prepared myself for the worst.
…Maybe I should start from the beginning of my day.
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A sign lit up that said that the plane had finally landed in Port Angeles and I let out a long sigh. The people around me immediately started to grab their carry ons to leave the plane. I grabbed my two items as well but chose to wait until the line of people had gone down to make a move. I wouldn't want to trip and cause the flow of people to stop. It would also be hard to ever show my face around here again.
The line had calmed enough so that I could go without the fear of making a fool out of myself. Of course, when I stepped off the plane, it was raining. Great, a traditional greeting to forks. I sighed again as I started to walk through the airport to look for Charlie.
I found him standing by the baggage claim awkwardly. As expected, he was in his full chief gear. Charlie was the chief of police in Forks; a very tiny town with a little over 3,100 people. It was a town where everyone knew everyone and grandparents and parents went to school together. Now I was the bland girl who would be moving here in the middle of the school year. Fantastic!
Charlie spotted me and we embraced in an awkward hug. It only lasted for two seconds at the most. I didn't complain though because that was just the way Charlie and I were. He was a small-town man of few words. Don't be fooled though, he was as observant as a hawk.
We both greeted each other before grabbing a couple of bags each. A lot of my clothes from Phoenix weren't acceptable for the weather here considering it was well…Phoenix. When we walked outside I noticed the cruiser, much to my chagrin. I kept in the sigh that wanted to be released and just gave a small smile for Charlie. We fit all of the bags into the trunk, surprise, surprise, and we were off.
The beginning of the ride was spent in relative silence. Like I said, man of few words. Once we got around halfway, he decided to break our awkward silence. "So…your car got here yesterday." He started. Ahh, my baby. The Dodge Viper that I had was my pride and joy. She was a pristine white with a custom black and blue interior. The first time I saw her, I knew she would be mine. I had saved money for years before that moment and I allowed myself to splurge to get her. She was kept in mint condition thanks to my skills. I had learned about cars just to keep her healthy. I would never tire of hearing that purr of the engine when I started her up.
I stopped thinking about her and focused on dad. "That is a fine piece of machinery." He complimented. I smiled with pride.
"Yeah she is. I can't wait to get behind her wheel again." I gushed. His moustache twitched upwards in a brief smile. We were in silence yet again for a while after that. None of us wanted to be the first to have to break it. He decided to break it…again.
He cleared his throat. "I hate to leave right after you just got here Bells, but there is something in Seattle that needs my attention. It's going to be a few days…I hope you don't mind being alone for that time." He glanced at me worriedly. I wondered how he would react if he knew how long mom had left me to go on a trip with Phil.
It would be nothing new. "It's fine Ch-dad. I like being alone most of the time. It gives me time to think and draw." I said with the wave of my hand
He still looked a little unsettled. "Do you remember Billy Black from La Push beach" He asked. I wracked my brain to try and remember. He had a son named Jacob and two daughters named Rachel and Rebecca. Since my father was close to Billy, and Jacob and I were around the same age, we would be put together to play. I remember us making mud pies together. I nodded in answer.
"If you want I could send him over to check on you a couple of times." He offered. Nothing like an almost complete stranger coming to check up on you. I had to get out of it.
I shook my head slowly. "Umm, I think I'll survive a few days by myself dad." I said. He nodded and we were once again in silence. Thankfully it was for the remainder of the drive.
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Charlie dropped me off at the house and left shortly after he grabbed his already packed suitcase. The house was exactly how I remembered it. The cabinets in the kitchen were still yellow after Renee had attempted to 'brighten the place up a bit'. As I walked up the stairs I saw pictures of myself at different stages of my life. I would have to ask him to take them down. It was also painfully obvious that Charlie wasn't over Renee.
When I got to my room, I saw that little had changed. My twin bed had been changed to a full with new purple sheets. A toy chest had been replaced with a desk that had an ancient looking computer sitting atop it. That's going to be a blast to try and use. I put my bags down and took a moment to soak in my new/old environment.
I could feel the tears threatening to fall but I held them back. A walk in the woods would probably calm me down. I grabbed my parka before heading to the door. I locked up and went to the path that was behind our house. It was peaceful, nature. The sounds and the smells just made me feel alive. That all ended when I heard a twig snap behind me with a feint growl.
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And so we were back to the present. Something was/is chasing me and it was gaining fast. Suddenly I felt myself flying through the air; towards a tree. My arm went out to brace myself but it was a terrible idea. I heard the sickening crack before I felt it. An agonized scream came from me and I huddled myself on the ground. I looked up and was immediately filled with fear.
There was a beautiful man staring at me with evil red eyes. Weird color. He had blonde hair and he looked rough. "Well look at what we have here. What are you doing this far out in the woods? No don't answer that, it doesn't matter." He said with a sick gleam in his eye. My mouth remained firmly closed even though I wanted to curse this monster. Whatever this man was, it wasn't human. As if to prove my point, he was next to me faster than my mind could process. I felt a great pain in my wrist and another scream left my lips. It took me a while to get past the pain and realize that he had broken my wrist.
Tears leaked from my eyes as I felt the throbbing pain in my arms, side and wrist. He smirked happily and I was disgusted. He went slower this time to grab my other wrist. "No, no! Please no more! Just please let me go!" I begged. There was no mercy as he slowly broke it as well.
He laughed with pleasure. "This was fun toots but I'm thirsty so I can't play anymore." And with that, he bit me on the neck. The initial pain of his teeth sinking in was nothing compared to the burning I felt a little while later. I screamed when the fire started to spread through me. I wanted to struggle but it hurt too much.
I could literally feel the blood being drained from my body. A vampire. A vampire was killing me. Something within me knew what he was. I could see black spots clouding my vision. I could just feel that this was the end.
By some strange miracle…he stopped drinking me. I could feel his presence leave in an instant. I had a second of relief though because the burning didn't go away when he did. The feeling was getting much worse, causing me to scream and squirm on the forest floor. My last thought before everything went black: What a way to arrive in Forks!
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