3I own nothing , not even the OC in the story Athera belongs to DarkLadyAthara and Ken and Triclops belong to the Jedi prince series , and the father and son bond between my favorite master and padawan pair was thought up by Bloody Phantom. I'm just doing a story that I thought would be great when I started reading Bloody Phantom's Son he never knew he had series months after I read DarkLadyAthara's story Lady Obscura: Little More Than a Shadow and of course saw the newest movies. I happen to love family centered stories so this one is the most family centered one I've ever thought up. Oh and this has parts from all 4 sources , the movies , the book series and the two fanfics so it might help if you read the fanfics for you to understand the parts mentioned in here.
And now enough of my blathering here's the story.
Qui Gon was up early as usual meditating as the sun rose on Coresont.
He could feel the force flowing around him and the eddies created by the sear movement of beings moving around in the same section of the city around the temple.
Even in such a small patch compared to the rest of the planet there were millions of beings living , being born , coming and going and dying. Hundreds of them were the brighter lights marking them as jedi , most in the temple.
He felt warm as the sun rose higher and he was brought deeper into the force. He felt warm all over like he was surrounded by warm sand and the hard floor under him felt gritty like there was a scattering of sand under him and it seemed like a 2nd sun joined Coresont's sun, but the being he felt before faded out of view in his mind until he could only feel 4 others and next to not plant or animal life. One was next to him , another some distance away ; both brightly shining showing that they were jedi and two dimmer lights show two normal people.
When Qui Gon opened his eyes he was not where he started, he was sitting out side of a hut on a desert part of a different planet. The jedi next to him had a slight beard like his own but short hair. Dressed in off white and brown clothing with a brown robe that was slightly worn and he was in his early 40's.
When the slightly younger man opened his eyes both of them gasped in recognition, he had multy colored eyes , blue grey green eyes. Qui Gon couldn't help but think that man looked formilar before but now he knew that he was sitting next to his son.
" Obi Wan." " Qui Gon!" Obi Wan said as he grabbed Qui Gon in a hug partly falling over while doing so. " your acting like you haven't seen me in years young one." Qui Gon said using his nickname while his arms returned the hug.
Obi Wan pulled away and straitened up to be sitting again. " I haven't seen you in years father." he said to his 53 year old father. " you know?" " I've known for years , I over heard you that night before you took me on as your padawan. I knew you had a point in your reasoning to keep the knowledge that we're father and son a secret from even me so I never said anything until after your death. I changed my personal information so everyone who looked could see who I was mourning, the council called me up to discuss it and were shocked at what the force hid from them. Master Yoda took it well."
Qui Gon looked around in wonder , " what is this? A vision? " " if it is then it one we're having at different times of our lives. You look like when I was a teenager." " well you were 18 when I saw you go to bed last night." his father told him.
Just before the father and son could figure out what was going on 3 figured appeared in the middle of a lightsaber duel. A man who appeared to be in his early 50's and a youngster who was still in her teens fighting a man dressed in black with a red lightsaber marking him as a sith wearing a mask and being overpowered by the master and his padawan . The trio paused, coming to the end of the duel the sith knew knowing that he couldn't win gave one last shout before he fell over on the sand.
" I hate you!" he yelled in his barratone voice before the master used a strong force suggestion for sleep.
They deactivaed their blue and green lightsabers and the sith's red before they saw their audience. Recognition could be seen in the man's eyes as he and is padawan made their way dragging the sleeping sith to the hut.
Here seems like a good place to end chapter 1 , i've got about half of the story written up by now so now its a matter of time of typing it all up after i've edited to to my satisfaction , so reading through it about 4 time and keeping an eye out while typing it up. I'm writing it about 10 pages a day during my free time at school , woo! Just 7 more week before we let out for summer. At the rate that I'm going I'm likely to be finished writing by next week and it may take me several week to type it up since I have to wait until my free time at home to type this and on top of it all my dad's using his laptop to do taxes right now so I have to wait until he's done for the day.
Oh well enjoy the story i'll try to post chapter 2 by tuesday .