The beginning
It was supposed to be a simple C-rank, bring Tazuna the bridge builder to Wave; they weren't supposed to be attacked by anyone other than bandits, they weren't supposed to fight ninja…but they did. They were first attacked by the missing-nin called the demon brothers, and then after traversing across a small section of the sea they were attacked by Zabuza Momochi. Kakashi-sensei had defeated him, but before he could finish him off, he was taken by a female hunter-nin, who was really his accomplice. They had trained the whole week to fight Zabuza, they thought they were ready…they were not even close.
On the bridge…surrounded by mirrors of ice…was Naruto Uzumaki, holding the "dead" body of his best friend.
"Is this the first time you have seen a loved one die in battle, and as such the first time your heart has been wrenched out of its chest?" spoke the false hunter-nin.
Naruto just stood there, holding the body of the last loyal male prodigy of the Uchiha clan. No, this was not the first time Naruto had seen a loved one die, this was not the first time he had his heart wrenched from his chest. Oh how he remembered that incident well. It would forever haunt his memories, until his dieing breath.
Flashback
It was October tenth, Naruto was sitting out in the rain, holding the cold body of a young girl with sparkling blonde hair and piercing green eyes. Her name was Chiyo; she had taken a wound to her that was slowly and painfully killing her. The culprit, a tall blue haired man, a former ANBU that specialized in assassinations, he had lost his wife in the Kyuubi attack, and hated Naruto for holding the monster.
"HAHAHAAHAHAHAAA, how does it feel demon, to see someone close to you die, feel my pain before I do the same to you monster." Yelled the crazed shinobi.
Naruto felt rage welled up inside of him, all the rage and hatred that he had hidden over the years was finally released. He wanted to kill the bastard, he tried to hurt him by killing an innocent…he would DIE!
"YOU BASTARD, I'LL FUCKING KILL YOU!" Naruto ran at the man who was unaware of Naruto's attack. Naruto plunged the kunai that the man shoved into Chiyo's arm right into his heart.
Naruto shoved the kunai deeper into his heart, staring into the eyes of the man that killed the person he cherished most. He hated the man, he had never hated anything, not hated anyone, more than he hated this man. He had endured Konoha's hatred towards him, so be it. But when he hurt Naruto's only friend, he would die. Naruto watched as the life slowly drained from the terrified and crazed eyes of the bastard shinobi. "Join your family in hell, YOU SON OF A BITCH!" Naruto shoved the kunai one last bit into his heart, seeing the last bit of life drain from his eyes.
Naruto stood up and ran back to Chiyo's side. "No Chiyo, don't die, please don't die. Don't leave me alone."
Chiyo looked up at Naruto, "Naruto, please, I don't think I can make it, Naruto…please…kill me."
Naruto was horrified, he couldn't possibly kill his precious person, "Chiyo please don't ask me to do that, we can still…" "NARUTO, I'M DIEING, PLEASE END THIS PAIN FOR ME…PLEASE!"
Naruto couldn't believe what Chiyo was asking him to do, but she was in pain, he couldn't stand that. So with great reluctance he raised the blood stained kunai, "(Kami-sama, forgive me)", and plunged it into her heart to give her a quick death.
"Naruto-kun", Naruto turned to see Chiyo's beautiful green eye's, seeing the life drain from them, "let me look into your eyes, let me have the sight of our eyes be the last thing I see." Naruto never turned away, granting Chiyo her final wish. He watched as the life drained from his most cherished person, the one he had killed, to end her pain.
Naruto swung his head back and roared to the thunder clouds as the rain pelted his tear stained face, "NOOOOOOOO." The lightning crashed around them as he roared in despair. Naruto, at 8 years old, would never forget what he had done, it would haunt his nightmare's…forever.
Flashback Kai
And now here he was, holding his precious person, just as he had held Chiyo not even 3 years ago. He could feel the white hot tears flowing down his face as the red chakra bubbled around him, he could feel the cold lifeless body of his self adopted brother and rival. How he wanted to have the power to hurt the damn hunter-bitch, how he wanted her to suffer for "killing" his brother. Little did he know, at that very time, the very demon that caused the damn villagers to hate him so much, was granting his wish.
Mindscape, Same Time
The Kyuubi who woke up not even minutes ago after being in a forced sleep since the sealing twelve years ago looked at its host's life. It saw every beating that he had endured because that thrice damned Uchiha that had forced it to attack a village that it had no quarrel with.
"They condemn a child for something he did not control, all because of me." Kyuubi raged to itself, loathing itself for hurting such an innocent soul. "I will make it up to him…but how." Kyuubi thought perhaps it could give him a bloodline…but that would cause him to become a hanyou. The Kyuubi snarled, hating itself for not being able to make it up to him. It then noticed something, the Kyuubi looked at his family history, it then had the biggest foxy grin on its face. "I just may have found a way to start making up my debt to you Naru-kun…" '(Where the fuck did the –kun come from?)' deciding to leave that thought for later, it activated the bloodlines of Naruto, the four great dojutsu's, and gave them a way to be compatible at last. But Kyuubi was not done there, it made sure that Naruto had all the power he could get from the dojutsu's, feeling that if anyone deserved their power, it was Uzumaki Naruto. Kyuubi then regrettably decided to make Naruto physically relive the memory of his friends death, to activate the final stages. "(Kit, please forgive me for causing you this pain, I feel my debt to you will never be repaid, but I will do whatever I can to make your life better)". Knowing that each dojutsu had a downside, the Kyuubi flooded the prepared product with its chakra to "purify" them. "Well, I may have been able to keep himself from making it impossible to use the eye's, but they will still have their downsides, at least the downsides are now only chakra based." Being satisfied with its finished project Kyuubi painfully began the activation process. "Naruto-kun I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me for the pain I am about to cause you." Kyuubi then began the process, never noticing that its tampering broke a seal that interfered with Naruto's intelligence.
Back with Naruto
As Naruto was crying he began to feel pain in his eyes and forehead, it started out small…then erupted into a pain far worse than any beating he had ever endured. He felt his eyes burning, he felt his forehead cracking in the center of his forehead right above his nose, he felt the flesh split and blood pour down his face. He clutched his forehead and felt the flesh surround the hole in his forehead like it would an eye socket, he then touched the inside of the hole and felt the blood forming together, solidifying, forming some sort of flesh object, he screamed in pain as his own chakra mingled with the red chakra that he knew was the nine-tailed foxes, he did not notice the chakra surrounded him in the shape of a fox protecting its young. All he felt was insurmountable pain, he heard tears of what sounded like sorrow, he finally looked down into his puddle of tears and blood to see his reflection…seeing a three eyed blond staring back at him…Naruto of the Four Dojutsu's was born.
First actual chapter, note that I am a beginner so please no flames or threatening messages.