Authors Notice on Luna, Gamer of Remnant…
Hi all, after reading a few of your reviews I cant help but agree with you.
I think I let the story go a bit… all over the place? Yea that sounds about right. While most other Gamer fics have a certain structure to them, I had that as well at the beginning, now? Not so much.
Gonna close this down, going for a full rewrite, needs to be done. For all the fans of my story, thanks for keeping it alive for me, will have the the rewrite up soon. It will be a lot more refined then before as well as slightly different.
To be honest, I didn't have a real plan past getting them into Beacon, after that, crazy took hold, as you can tell.
Sorry if this pisses you all off, been annoying the hell out of myself trying to keep it going but the flow has died.
The hardcore battle was fun to write though… was gonna add a sort of flashback chapter for 18 with a few other bits and bobs… and ideas you want to see in the rewrite, message me!
For a first time Gamer fic, I think it went well… until it crashed and burned…
Big Thanks go out to Emiliano733, and all the other great folk that reviewed!