Sorry to report that the newer and longer version of this story is delayed due to sickness and the unfortunate complications that come from moving from one part of the country to another. But I am still working on it and other stories and now that closing the deal on the old house is done I just need to keep my sanity long enough to finish the move and write the rest of chapters three and a four. Plus I accidentally packed my storyboard notes which I will not have access to until after we move and settle in the new house. I probably have a big fat red hand-print on my forehead from all the times I slapped myself for my panicked packing frenzy.
I hope to release the update version including chapter 4 and maybe five before new years gets even close on the calendar.
P.S.: any comments/suggestions welcome.