yeah i was looking over this story and it sucked. I was a bit to eager to starts writing it that i didn't really planned much out, So i will be doing it all over again. I will change somethings up such as the first chapter, the character backgrounds, and as well figuring out how The Avengers being there from the beginning changes the plot/timeline. I will save the first to chapters for now and then later repost them when the story comes to that point.
So look forward to the revamped version and i hope you like it a bit better
I was having laptop issues as well, that being said I am going to start a new uploading system I'll write a chapter for each of my stories and when I have one chapter for each I'll upload them all in a single day. So the next time I upload this story I'll also upload the other stories and you could check them out if you want. Thanks