I might be a dick to all of you by saying this, but I'm rewriting this story.
I know that in my previous stories, particularly my Dragon Age/Mass Effect crossover, I had rewritten that about three times or so, and I will admit I've not been happy about that along with you. However, I realised that my earlier chapters were rushed just like some chapters in The galaxy's greatest Warriors, all written purely on mood swings without proper planning.
But rest assured, I will take the steps to prevent this from happening again.
Until then, this is Ebanu8.