Well folks, It's about time that I admit defeat: The script format, while appropriate for a cinematic series like Star Wars, has not exactly been friendly to most viewer's eyeballs. In fact, the chief complaint I've had, whenever I got some negative feedback, was about the format.
With that in mind, I've decided to reboot War for the Outer Rim into novel format, and re-titled it as Star Wars: The Knights of Ren. You can see it right here on Fanfiction, with two Episodes already posted.
See you there!