Ladies and Gentlemen I give you the prologue of my first fanfic! Please read and review, constructive criticism is welcomed!

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October, 1637

Hi no Kuni - Konohagakure no Sato

It has been 1500 years since the Rikudo Sennin discovered Chakra and shared his knowledge with the world. 110 years since the founding of the first Shinobi Village, Konohagakure no Sato. 17 years since the fall of the Uzumaki stronghold, Uzushiogakure no Sato, and the journey of her last surviving soul to the Village Hidden in the Leaves. 16 years since she took her place as the second Jinchuriki of the Kyuubi no Kitsune. 4 years since the last Namikaze and the Last Uzumaki were married and 9 months since they were told she was with child. Here is where our story begins…

On top of the Hokage Monument, a spiral appeared in the air. After a few seconds a tall form in a black hooded cloak with a black and white mask appeared. As he gazed at the sleeping Leaf Village. He sneered behind his mask. "Konohagakure no Sato, you have been judged for the suffering of those you have abandoned, and found guilty. Your death." As he turned from the cliffs edge he reached into the folds of his cloak and withdrew a tattered Hitai-ate, 'This is for you Rin…'

In a small cave outside Konoha, a group of people stood around a hospital bed looking down at a woman holding two small bundles in her arms. Kushina Uzumaki held her sons and smiled at her husband laid out on the floor with a happily glazed smile on his face. "I guess I should have told him that it was going to be twins but I wanted to see his face!"

Tsunade Senju the Slug Sannin was bent over holding her stomach laughing. "Oh KAMI that was amazing! As soon as Biwako handed me the first one and told you to get ready and push for the second he folded like a puppet with no strings! I am so glad you didn't tell him!"

Jiraiya leaned over and shook Minato's shoulder slowly rousing him. "Come on kid, wake up and look at your boys." Minato shook his head to clear it.

"I'm not sure my heart can take that kind of shock, I thought for sure I'd be taking the hat back if you didn't wake up soon." Chuckled Hiruzen Sarutobi, Sandaime Hokage, as he put his arm around his wife Biwako. "And no amount of laughter is worth that much paperwork." As he held his second born Minato smiled. "You know Sarutobi, the secret to the paperwork is..."


Dust and stone shrapnel filled the air as blurry figure swept through the room stabbing out at Hiruzen, who was pushed back by his wife, taking the Kunai meant for him. As the dust settles the figure reappeared holding the blankets containing the first born, he slapped explosive tags to it and formed a one handed seal.

"Yondaime! You have two choices. Give me the woman or I kill him."

Tsunade and Jiraiya moved to stand by Minato and Kushina. The blonde Hokage handed his second son to Tsunade. "Get him to the hospital now. Jiraiya you take the Sarutobi's with you." They both Shunshined from the room with their respective cargo. Kushina gripped his hand as she looked into her husband's eyes and nodded. "I'll go with you, just don't hurt him."

"Very well, the deal is struck."

The masked intruder flipped the precious bundle to Minato who caught it and Hraishined directly to the hospital. Kushina slowly got up from the bed. "Move Woman!" Barked the faceless assailant. Suddenly golden chains shot from the woman's back pinning him in place. "Ahhh Kushina, I knew exactly how this was going to play out from the moment you looked at him. You may have excellent teamwork but Golden Boy isn't here to save you now..."

At the hospital Minato arrived in a swirl of golden light. Tsunade took the crying baby from him and put him next to his brother. Minato looked over at where Jiraiya and Hiruzen in his black and silver battle armor kneeled next to a blanket covered form. Both of them stood and faced the Yondaime. Hiruzen spoke in a voice that seemed to freeze the very air it travelled through. "Do not stand in my way, I am going to make that bastard regret the day his mother gave birth to him."

As they started for the door an oppressive chakra and Killing Intent bore down on them. Minato stared out as a great red cloud of chakra slowly took shape. He immediately located the Hraishin tag his wife had on her wedding ring, grabbed the other two and flashed to her. The end of the jump saw them deposited at a small pond. Kushina lay in a giant seal array as the Kyuubi and it's new master were quickly pulled into his mask. The aged Hokage and his student set off after them while Minato prayed to all the gods above and below he could get her to the hospital in time.

At the gates of Konoha the man reappeared and summoned the fox. The alarm sounded by the Sannin when they returned had not gone unheeded. ANBU, ROOT, Jonin and Chunin all leaped into the fray while Genin did their best to sheperd the civilians to safety. But for all the destructive power of an entire hidden village, against the might of the Nine Tails it was as if a child was throwing pebbles into the sea. Fire Jutsus did no damage. Water simply boiled away before it even got close. Wind and Lightning seemed to make it even angrier and the less said about the Earth Jutsu and explosive tags the better. The enraged fox swiped his tails taking out buildings and Shinobi with equal regard. Raising his paw he slammed it through another building crushing all those inside.

In a back alley of the village the Sandaime and Jiraiya were engaged in a war of atrrition with the masked renegade. For every hit they landed, 10 more flew right through him. But he seemed to be able to reach out and beat them around at will. The man suddenly looked up, "Finally come out to play..." as a yellow flash lit up the darkened road. Just as the rogue ninja was about to engulf the fourth Hokage in his teleportation Jutsu, the fourth grabbed the rogue shinobis chest and marked him with a Hraishin tag. Applying chakra to the seal Minato launched the startled Shinobi into his old training ground. Minato spun back to the surprised duo,

"Hiruzen I've broken the link between that man and the Kyuubi! Get it outside town and stall it until I deal with this." He Hraishined away after the rogue ninja. Sarutobi leapt to the top of the Hokage Tower to use his trump card. Biting his thumb he slammed his hands to the ground.

Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Monkey King Emma!

In a puff of smoke a monkey with long white hair held back from his head with a Leaf Hitai-ate and wearing a tiger skin vest and Shinobi pants stood before Hiruzen.

"Hiruzen you call me to fight the Kyuubi no Kitsune?! You never do anything half way do you?"

At the wizened old shinobi's nod the monkey grinned.

"Very well. Henge: Adamantine Staff!"

In another puff of smoke the monkey king was replaced with a black bo staff with bronze end-caps. Hiruzen grabbed the end and extended the staff pushing the Kyuubi outside the gates of Konoha. The Kyuubi struggled to get back to the devastated village to continue the destruction, but the aged Sandaime and Jiraiya in his Toad Sage mode didn't give him the chance.

At his old training grounds a bruised and battered Minato pulled himself from the crater his Rasengan made in his fight with the rogue. Holding his ribs , he glared at the spot where the mysterious Shinobi had spiralled into his mask and escaped. Shrugging his shoulders to loosen them he located his wife's Hraishin tag and vanished in a flash of light.

Hope you all enjoyed the first part of the story like it said at the top read and review, it's what keeps this thing driving forward. Till next time!