The story is sort of bland right now, but this is my first story, don't judge (that's Sans' job). Enjoy!


Should I listen to Mom, or should I keep going? I had a feeling that I should keep going, as it was getting cold and maybe there were more people here. People who… Aren't as nice as Mom.

I decided to keep going. As soon as I stepped out of the hall, my cell phone rang.

"Hello? My child, do you prefer cinnamon, or butterscotch? No, wait don't tell me… Is it- Do you like cinnamon more?" Wha- How did Mom know?! "Yes, Mom! I like cinnamon more!" I was still dwelling on the fact that she somehow knew, when she answered and hung up. "Ok, thanks!"

Well, that was weird. I decided to keep going. I saw a weird little golden-yellow four-pointed star in the next room. It was shiny and made me want to touch it. I had seen a couple of these before, but I don't think Mom sees them, so I ignored them. This time, I reached out and touched it. A warm feeling filled me and as if I was in a video game, a menu popped up.

Playfully crinkling through the leaves fills you with determination.

Frisk- LV 1

Ruins- Leaf Pile

Save Return

I selected the Save option, and another menu popped up.

Frisk- LV 1

Ruins- Leaf Pile

File Saved.

Then it disappeared. I am really starting to feel like I'm in a video game.

I kept going, eventually reaching another room. All of a sudden, the world seemed to flash black and white and a monster appeared in front of me. Then, yet another menu appeared.

This one was a bit more complicated, but I still felt like I was in a video game.

*Froggit hopped close

FIGHT ACT ITEM MERCY

I chose the ACT button and Complimented the froggit. It apparently blushed, and then I Spared it. I kept going, noticing more of the Save points along the way. Every time I saw one, I Saved.

My phone rang again. "Hello, my child. You do not dislike butterscotch, do you? As in, would you turn up your nose if you found it on you plate?" This was a bit weird. Was she baking a pie or something? "No, of course not Mom! I actually like the two of them together!" She seemed to breathe a sigh of relief. "Ok thank you my child. By the way, have you left the room?" I froze. I wanted to tell her the truth, but I had the feeling that she would just tell me to go back. "No, of course not, Mom!" She seemed to relax even more. Somehow, I noticed this over the phone. "OK, thank goodness. There are some puzzles up ahead that I have yet to explain." Then, she hung up.

In the next room, I found more monsters that attacked me, but I always used the ACT button, then Spared them. There was also a ghost lying on the ground that kept saying "ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ", pretending to sleep.

"Umm, hello, Mr. Ghost, could you please move out of the way?" He noticed me, and a Fight began. The menu told me that his name was Napstablook. He also looked like he was depressed. I tried Complimenting him, but he seemed to believe I was only trying to make him move out of the way. One option left. I chose the Flirt option. He seemed to blush then asked me if I wanted to see something cool. I answered that yes, I would, and he seemed to put on a hat.

It looked amazing. "I call it Dapper Blook. Do you like it?" I immediately answer. "Yes! It looks so cool! I love it!" He blushes again and leaves. The Fight is over.

I kept going. The room branched off into a fork. I went one way, deciding to investigate the other way later. The way I went wasn't another hallway at all, though. It was just another room, with a bunch of cobwebs and some signs. One of them read 'Spider bakes sale! All proceeds go to real spiders! Made by spiders, for spiders, of spiders!' Eww. Gross. But I decided to buy a donut. I put 7G (Which seemed to be local currency here) that I got from the fights in one of the webs. Some spiders crawled out with a purple-ish donut.

I grabbed it and thanked them. I stored the Spider Donut in my inventory and exited the room. I decided to try going the other way. There was another sign advertising the spider base sale, but I walked right past it. There were also more puzzles, but I solved them with ease. Eventually, I arrived at another fork in the road. I went straight forward and ran into a froggit. It didn't want to fight, though. It told me that it'd seen Mom exit from the door on the right. I went in and I found a large balcony.

To the left, there was a Toy Knife. When I grabbed it, there was an option to equip it as a weapon. I did so, just in case. I had also equipped a Faded Ribbon that I found earlier on.

I went back to the fork in the road and head up. There was a big, dead tree, and I was wondering how it even grew underground with no sunlight, but then my phone rang.

"My child, I am coming back. I have left you there for far too lon-" She noticed me. "How did you get here, Frisk? Are you hurt?" Mom was quite worried about me. It was sort of funny. "No, Mom, I'm not hurt." She turned around and pointed at a house behind her. "That is my house. Come inside my child. I have a surprise for you."

I followed her inside.


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