55Hello fans this will be my fourth story but my first duck tales story I got into the series in 2020 and I fell in love with it, this story will be centered on my favorite character Louie. Without any spoilers here's the first chapter plz leave reviews and tell me what you think.
Chp1: Pilot
Months Ago
After the events of the moonvasion peace had returned to earth the moonlanders had begun to make the new planet their home. Their friend Della introduced them to the wonderful things earth offered, yo-yos and slap on bracelets. The aliens even shared their knowledge of technology to the earthers in exchange, one person in particular was overjoyed with their vast knowledge Gyro Gearloose the top scientist in Duckburg and scrooge Mcduck's trusty ally.
The chicken scientist along with his assistant Manny were scavenging through the moonlanders ship's hoping to add their resources to his one work. "This is incredible, all the great things I can make with this stuff come Manny these gadgets won't invent themselves".
*Stomp Stomp* (We have gadgets that do that already). Manny motioned by tapping his hoof on the ground.
While looking Gyro dug through a pile and came across a sealed container, peeking his interest the scientist picked it up to further inspect the box. "What could this be"? He fiddled with the box until he accidentally managed to open the container making him drop it. Gyro got down to further inspect the inside of the container till suddenly a shiny black goo shot out from it and stuck on his chest attacking him, The scientist yelped panicking with the unknown substance sticking to him. He rolled around on the ground pulling at the substance trying to get it off but it was no use.
Manny had heard the commotion and ran over to help him but before he could the goo got off and latched onto the man horse. *Stomp stomp*(This is so gross get it off).
Suddenly Manny was hit by a sonic blast and the black goo was shot back into the container and sealed up.
Manny and Gearloose looked for the source and saw one of the moonlanders standing there with a sonic gun, the alien was female and a bit lanky in height; she wore a yellow space jumpsuit with a lab coat over it. She went over to the two to check up on them.
"Are two alright?'' she asked.
"Y-yes what in the name of all that is science is that".
*Stomp Stomp*(It felt like it was trying to take over my body"). Manny said
"It was my name is Luna I'll tell you more about this thing but right now we need to get somewhere private, do you have a place".
"Y-yes my lab". Gyro answered. He took out a little bulb that was converted into a phone and made a call. "Intern bring the car around".
Seconds later Fenton Gyro's intern brought a car around to pick them up.
" I came as soon as possible". The three got inside the vehicle, "Hey who's your new friend and what's in the box"?
"INTERN drive now questions later". He ordered Fenton to slam his feet on the gas pedal and speed off from the sight.
Unbeknownst to them that black goo wasn't the only one around this new goo was brown and just as wet. It slipped out of between two cracks of the damaged wreck and began moving off the shop looking for a target. But it was too weak; it needed a life form it moved itself over to a nearby rat and latched itself onto it. After seconds of agonizing and constant squeaking the goo finally was one with the rat, the creature then retreated into the depths of the sewer.
Months later Mcduck Manor
The duck family was doing really well and now with Della back things were back to normal, she was making up all the time she had missed with her family she especially made it up to Louie. After their personal trip to Big Rock Candy Mountain the two had grown closer, she even encouraged her youngest son to come on more adventures with her so they could both see angels in any situation they may face.
The family had currently gotten home from their latest adventure and they visited Transylvania looking for some lost treasure from Vlad the Impaler. Each member had a necklace of garlic around their neck to protect themselves from the vampires who guarded it, minus launchpad who got hungry and ate his. Which was why he was the most beat up so Beakly had to carry him.
"Oh man nothing better than facing a horde of vampires with your family it's Dew-tastic". Dewey said.
"Hey Webs thanks for the help with those blood sucking freaks".
"No sweat". The girl duck said.
"Team work makes the dream work" the two said harmonizing.
"I was more drawn to the historic sights". Huey added.
"You already know what intrigued me Louie said".
"Bless me bagpipes, it's good adventuring with the family again" Scrooge said.
"Uncle scrooge don't worry we can take care of the gold so you don't throw out your back".
"Louie". His mom said, giving him the look.
"Okay". Louie took out the treasure he pockets and placed it inside the wheel barrel.
Della ruffled his hair smiling "Good boy", She said. Making Louie smile and fix his hair, he then got a message on his phone and smiled.
"Uhh I'd love to stay and help with the gold but I have to go meet up with a friend so see ya". Louie then turned and ran out of the mansion.
"Friend what other friend could Louie have"? Webby asked.
"Hopefully it's not that monster rich kid named Doofus ugh" Just the name made the blue triplet sick.
"This isn't the first time he's run off who exactly is this friend of his and why hasn't he brought them here"? Della asked.
"Maybe he's afraid we'd freak them out and he wouldn't want to hang with Louie any more". Donald said.
"Give it time I'm sure Louie will introduce us when he's ready". Beakly told them.
Louie had ventured into Duckburg and stopped right in front of Funzo's waiting for someone.
"Come on where are you"? He asked.
Suddenly the green duck heard a rustle coming from the bushes he walked over to investigate, when he got close he spread the bushed open to see nothing only a piece of paper that read look out.
"Ambush" Suddenly Louie was tackled from behind and knocked to the ground, he then hears laughter coming from a female duck he looked up to see the person he was waiting for. It was Lena Saberwing; Webby's best friend Violet's adopted sister and former aunt/slave to Magica de spell.
Ever since the moonvasion the two began taking a liking to each other, both had slick mindset and shared a cunning personality. They've been seeing each other in secret engaging in all manor of activities like pranking their enemies such as, putting lemons in glom golds pocket then having a dozen harpy attack him. Or Tossing stink bombs into the beagle boy's junkyard.
"Hey green bean".
"Hey shadow queen".
Lena helped the duck boy up to his feet, "How was the adventure"?
"It was good, scary bad then good again, I even brought you something". Louie took a gold coin and flicked it at Lena which she caught.
"That's a gold coin from the lost treasure of Vlad the Impaler".
"Wow Lou how'd you get this passed your uncle"?
"Oh you know me sharper then the sharpies either that or the old man is losing his touch to keep up".
Lena started laughing "You are such a bad boy any way you are ready to bring this inside". She said pointing to the doors of funzos.
"Why yes milady". Louie offered her his arm which she wrapped her own arm around his and the pair walked inside ready to engage in a hours worth of activities.
Drake residence
Doofus Drake sat in his room vexed know that he has to share his fortune with his new adopted B.o.y.d, each day his parents fonded over him day in and day out like he was trying to steal them away. Doofus never liked sharing he was an entitled child who wanted control and power but now that's forced to share it with someone his world was coming down.
"This is an outrage sharing my Gummeemama's fortune to a short pile of tin with wires, she left it for me, me that is my money and it's all that brats fault".
In a rage Doofus picks up a nearby shoe and tosses it a picture of Louie which had a cross on his face.
"I'll get you back for this Llewelyn one way or another".
"Doofus keep it down up there". His mom ordered.
"You dare order me around servant". He barked back.
"Don't you dare use that tone in front of your mother young man, you know what better yet you're grounded". His father yelled.
That set the fat duck child off he let out a deranged cry and began to run rampant tearing his room apart and tossing junk everywhere. "You did this, You did this Llewelyn mark my words you will pay". He picks up a ball, throws it at the target which bounces off and hits him right in the stomach.
"Mark my words". He said holding onto his stomach in pain.
Money Bin
After the mcducks emptied the gold into the bin they made their way out of the bin not before Huey ran into Gyro.
The scientist was pushing a cart with equipment hidden under a cloth with a sign that says nothing suspicious.
"Dr. Gearloose". He called out
"Oh red nephew".
"Are you inventing something crazy can I see".
"Oh uh I'm just stocking up on equipment real boring stuff really any who see you around". The chicken theme and towards the elevator frantically pressing the button to close the door.
"O-kay that was weird".
Gyro was sweating profusely almost making him drop his equipment, the elevator stopped and walked out. The lab was completely redecorated; gyro now had pod's around his lab containing subjects, most likely the goop's that he found last month. Turns out the goop multiplied and made offspring.
"What's the news so far"? Gyro asked.
"From what our studies show these creatures are amorphous extraterrestrials who seek to form a symbiosis with a living organism". Luna explained.
"Symbiosis so they're like Symbiotic parasites"? Gyro asked.
"I prefer to call them symbiotes". Luna said.
Manny came over and clapped his hooves together *Clap clap*(That sounds pretty cool).
"Thank you Manny". Lunas said. "Only problem is we don't know what these things could do if attached to someone, one latched onto me and Manny and it wasn't pretty".
*Clap clap*(Don't remind me bro) Manny said.
"The safest thing we can do is keep this under wraps till we come up with a plan on what to do". Gyro said.
"Agreed though maybe dangerous as a scientist it's our duty for new discoveries and new endless possibilities something can bring.
Some Place else
The same rat from months ago continued to scavenge the sewers feeding off of what it had to conquer even if it was off other rat's or any other creatures. It began to sniffing around looking for a higher source of power a new target, it suddenly caught whiff of something and ran towards the source
Funzo's
Back with Louie and Lena the two were having the time of their lives they played skee ball and by play they got on top of the machine and started dunking them into the thousand point slot. They jammed together on Uke or Puke which Louis was surprisingly good at. And they messed around in the ball pit Lena thought it'd be funny to use her magic to levitate some balls and drop them all over guests, the pair started laughing but stopped when a server slipped on a ball and fell over making a hot pizza he was carrying fall on his face. Seeing this the two ducks dived down slowly into the ball pit to avoid getting in trouble.
After running around so much the two got tired and sat at a nearby table chowing on pizza, the pair was laughing hysterically as Louie showed her a video of Dewey performing a crazy stunt with soda's. It didn't go so well and Dewey shot himself into a tree making it collapse on him.
"Soda flying more like a tree crashing". She said.
"And right here is me and mom's trip at Big Rock Candy mountain". The duck boy showed the girl by scrolling through the different photo's.
"That was the first time I actually got time together with mom, not including the moonvasion, just real genuine mother and son time".
"I'm glad Webb's told me about the timephoon and the punishment, I couldn't believe that your mom punished the way she did, I thought Magica was cruel". Lena said.
"Yeah I admit it was a bit much but I realized that I had to learn one way or another". Louie started to get a sad look on his face he never did tell anyone about what his mom said to him that day.
"But still that's pretty harsh sure you caused it but you couldn't have known that your action would cause this to happen", Lena grab's Louie's hand making him blush. "Green, somethings are just beyond our control".
Hearing those words made Louie cheer up, "Your right I come from a crazy family with crazy adventures with crazy abilities. I sometimes forget I'm just a kid, a kid who made a mistake thanks to Shadow queen".
"Anytime Green bean".
"Man I don't know about you but I'm getting pretty hungry how about some pizza on me".
"You snuck more gold away from your uncle"?
"Nope I have a different way of paying oh jane".
"Yes ". The waitress answered.
"I couldn't help but notice but your hair is really blowing today".
"Oh Mr. Duck such a charmer the usual slice for you and your lady friend"?
"You know it".
Lena was impressed by this "Whoa Webby told me you were a smooth talker but that was pretty impressive". Lena complimented.
"Thank you Shadow queen".
Half an hour later Louie and Lena were leaning against a railing looking out into the night sky.
"So are you using your magic to get home or are your dad's coming to get you"?
"I called them ahead of time so they should be here soon. Did you want a ride?
"Nah I'm cool with walking besides I haven't quite told anybody about us yet".
"Oh right if pink ever knew she'd go- well you know how she gets".
The two start laughing in unison *beep beep*, suddenly a car pulls up with Lena's dad's inside.
"There's my ride, I'd better get going".
"Sure I'll see you soon Lena, next time let's hang at the pier".
"Sounds like a plan". Lena bends down to Louie's level and plants a kiss on his cheek making him blush and stand there in a romantic daze, never in his life had he felt this wonderful sensation.
"Well bye Green". The female duck said. Walking to the car and it drives off leaving the green triplet standing there, he then falls over on his back smiling like a lunatic".
"Hot dog". He led out.
Later
Louie was making his way back to the manor feeling pretty good about himself, had a perfect date with the perfect girl, and he hit first base with her two. It felt great having his first kiss before his two older brothers if it weren't for the fact that they'd tease him for this he'd rub it in their faces. He finally reached the front food of the manor; he peeked his head inside to see if anybody was waiting.
"Okay seems clear good". He tiptoed quietly making sure not to alert anyone but unbeknownst to him someone was watching from above.
"AMBUSH". Webby came crashing down onto Louie wearing her night vision goggles.
"Hey Webs" Louie said, being caught off guard.
"How was your time with your friend?" she asked with an overly cheery voice.
"Oh it was pretty good we hung out at funzos".
"What's their name? Is it a boy or a girl? '' Do I know them".
"Uh Webs we'll talk later about this". *yawn*. "I'm pretty tired so im off to bed goodnight. Louie headed upstairs to his room to turn in for the night.
Drake Residence
Doofus was in his room which now had a bolted door in front, he was mopping to himself holding a grudge towards his family and rival Louie duck. His room was completely trashed from throwing stuff around; it had gotten so out of hand that he had to be tied into a straight jacket and placed into his bed which was standing upward and holding him to it.
"Brother mother father and I wish you goodnight". B.o.y.d said he then walked off to his room.
The lights to Doofuses room went out but the child was bent on vengeance; he just didn't know how to get it, After a few minutes he tired himself out and fell asleep. The same rat from the sewers showed up at the window and chewed itself inside, it scurried across the floor and right up to the duck child. It crawled over towards Doofus then the goo came out of the rat and climbed it's way up to the boy's face, it then started to cover his face and enter his body. Doofus woke up to feel the cold slimy sensation entering his body, making him shake out of control til he completely stopped and lowered his head down. After seconds Doofus shot his head back with no pupils in his eye's nothing but empty lifeless pores.
Chapter one is done and done thanks so much for the review guys. It's really appreciated and as you can see I totally went for the Louie x Lena ship. I just love the pairing of those two. I wanna give thanks to Dark Louie, Jake Long Dragon, and HerosCentral I understood some of what you told but i'll really consider your ideas. I'd love to hear more ideas from you. Also I need your guy's help for dialogue because that's where the trial will be happening. that's all for now peace