3Okay, let's start from the beginning, I'm Jay, a teen who took a liking to fanfiction and decided to make one.
The previous stories I made were a bit mid in my opinion, so I thought I should re-write it since I wanted it to have life, not an empty husk of a story.
So here I am, starting from scratch, seeking advice from long-time fanfic writers. The mc is still Jaymie, but the entire story will be different from the first ones I made.
Quick disclaimer: there will be some 'stuff' and a bit of swearing, (but it'll be like this: frick, shoot, etc. maybe some actual swearing too.)
So if you don't want to see those, then be on your way. Btw, this fanfiction will update slowly cuz' i got school.
Prologue: A Normal and Depressing Life
"Kids! Breakfast is ready!" Jaymie's mom called out while she prepared their food. Jaymie got up and thought of the dream he had last night. "What was that dream?" He checked his phone, it was 4:30 AM.
After waking up his siblings, he headed downstairs to eat breakfast. It was his favorite: rice, cooked ham, a few sunny side eggs, and some crispy bacon with ketchup on the side.
After eating, he washed his face and brushed his teeth. He prepared the clothes he and his siblings will wear to school. Following that, he headed into the shower first.
After he checked if he forgot something, he looked back at his parents, "I'm heading out!" he said, walking out the door. "Be careful out there okay?", His mom said while washing the dishes. "Yes mom, I gotta skedaddle, see ya later!" he said as he closed the gate. Riding his bike to school.
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BE-
An alarm clock hit 8:00 AM and chimed loudly beside Jaymie. He shut it down before it made him more irritated. He sat up in his apartment bed and looked around.
His apartment was a mess, there were clothes, food crumbs, and a bunch of other stuff on the floor, in the kitchen, bathroom, under his couch, and nearly every inch of his apartment was covered in trash.
In the corner of the room was his gaming setup, to the right was a bookshelf filled with anime manga, actual books, and some Minecraft fan books.
"What a dream. I should probably clean this place, it stinks." He thought as he cleaned up his whole apartment room.
After that was done, he went to the bathroom to clean.
After that, he looked at himself in the mirror then checked the fridge to see if there was any food left. "Great, guess I'll go shopping."
An eternal amount of time later...
"God, that line took forever." Jaymie internally facepalmed as he exited the store, carrying 2 paper bags filled with food and some other stuff.
After he got home and sorted out the groceries, he checked the time, it was almost 9 o'clock.
"Okay, I still got time for breakfast." He said to himself and checked the fridge.
"What the fuck am i going to cook?" He deadpanned as he wasn't that adept at cooking, yet his 2 brain cells thought of buying all that shit with nothing in mind.
"Okay, I've been doing this for god knows how long, but if this tastes not so great I'll still eat it. I mean, who in their right mind would waste food right?"
Flashback...
Jaymie was just casually helping around the house, then he checked the fridge if there were some expired food to throw out.
After he had gone through each, only one smelled funny, he took it out of the fridge and tossed it out (Only the inside, not the entire pot.)
After a little while, his Mom came downstairs. and as she went to the bathroom, Jaymie said to her.
"Mah, I threw out the food. Just letting you know!" He shouted to reassure that she heard.
"Why did you throw it out!?" She shouted from behind the closed door.
"It smelled funny, and Pops was still sleeping and I didn't wanna bother him." He explained while filling up the water bottles.
"That was made last night, you idiot!" She replied, causing Jaymie to shudder.
"Oh… my bad…" After she got out, she grabbed a shoe conveniently in front of her.
"Get yo ass over here boy, you're getting a whoopin'!" She said, grabbing the shoe and chasing after Jaymie.
"PLEASE! NO! NOT THE SHOE! AHHH!-" He exclaimed, getting hit in the back whilst running for the door..
Flashback Ends...
Jaymie winced at the thought of it. "Damn, that hurts just thinking about it, but she's still a great mom though," he said with a gentle smile on his face as he ate.
After that, he hopped onto his computer, booted it up, opened Discord, and started playing with his friends.
A few hours later, he took a break and had lunch, then he continued working on a game he would release on Steam called: I am BEAN 2, a game about a walking, talking badass bean saving the world from the Pineapple Pizza Corporation. The main villain is a Kiwi Fruit named Mr. Tyeson, the CEO of PPC.
When he made a good amount of progress, he made dinner and headed straight to bed. Unbeknownst to him, someone or something dragged him and his room into another dimension.
13 Hours Later...
The alarm clock chimed again. He turned it off, sat up, and rubbed his eyes. "Where am I?" He looked around, he was still in his apartment.
The only thing out of place was the outside. He shouted "I'M IN SPACE!? I'M GONNA DIE! AAH- wait, how am I not dying? I can't breathe in space." After the realization, he calmed down. Observing his apartment, he noticed a note on his PC. it read:
Human, if you're reading this, that means you have been chosen...
"Chosen? Chosen for what? Eating?" He said as he laughed at his joke.
Shut up! And listen to my epic- you know what? Just get on with it, you won't do it anyway.
"Alright, if you say so." Jaymie shrugged, after he put down the note, floating screens appeared in front of him. "What is this? An RPG?" he said to himself as he scrolled and tapped some stuff.
A while later…
"Okay, I'm done! So, what do-OHHH SHIT!"
A portal appeared below him mid-sentence and sucked him inside.
After he left, 2 figures stood where the portal was and discussed something…
Next time on: Remant's New Visitor…
"Where the hell am I? It's snowing like crazy!"
"What is that!? Some black goo?"
"I didn't get your name by the way."
"My name's Ruby, Ruby Rose. What's yours?"
"Jaymie, Jaymie Jazzberry."
"Heh, that's a funny name."
"Thanks."
And that's done, I'll start working on the next chapter right away, please leave a review.
Tell me what you think, and show your suggestions as it might help me out a lot ok?
News Flash! I'm being helped by a Beta Reader! Their username on Discord is nexTime#5956, but I'll ask for their FFnet.