150Disclaimer: I don't own Love Hina
Chapter 1-the fight because of a video game
A sunny afternoon begins at the Hinata apartments with the Cherry Blossom Festival soon approaching. Keitaro returns from an errand with a plastic Gamestop bag, waving at Motoko, who is out front doing her normal practice.
"HEY SU! Isn't it right that you wanted me to get Soul Caliber 2?"
Su runs out and high-kicks him in the face
"YAYYY! You got it right this time!"
"What was that for?! I'm not even inside yet!"
She snatches the game and dashes back inside.
"I'll never understand that girl" -;;
Suddenly, the ground begins to shake and Motoko sees a figure running up the stairs…very quickly. As she begins to unsheathe her sword, the person has already made it to the top with a very pissed look. It is a 6'2", 20 year-old male with short brown hair pushed up in the front. He carries a backpack, a duffle bag, and a samurai sword. He looked around and noticed Keitaro.
"YOU!" He points at Keitaro.
"OH SHIT!" Oo;;; Keitaro begins to run for his life
"YEAH, YOU BETTER RUN NOW BOY!" He drops his luggage, draws his sword and begins chasing Keitaro.
With exceptional speed he blocks Keitaro's path and lunges forward to strike, but Motoko blocks it with her blade. Everyone inside runs out to see the problem.
"What's all the… WHOA! Who the hell is this guy?" Kitsune says with confusion.
The young man, with his sword still against Motoko's, replies, "Someone who is about to kabob a thief!" He fires a death glare at Keitaro.
Naru: "what are you talking about? What would a pervert like him have stolen?"
"This S.O.B stole my Soul Caliber 2 game!"
Everybody sweat drops and falls over.
Keitaro, with a nervous look, "I would just like to see you prove it."
"He doesn't have to."
Everybody looks at Su
"Keitaro did get Soul Cal 2, but it's for the PS2. We have XBOX"
"THANK YOU! NOW IF THIS GIRL WOULD GET OUT OF MY WAY, I WILL GLADLY KICK HIS ASS FOR YOU!"
"You threaten Urashima, therefore I cannot let you live…unless you leave NOW!"
They both stare at each other eye-to-eye for a few seconds.
"All right then!" the stranger says with a smile and jumps back about twenty feet.
"COME ON!"
He slashes the air with his sword, sending an energy slice towards Motoko, who easily dodges aside and charges the stranger to strike, but he blocks it and trips her, adding insult and injury by punching her face into the ground. He then grabs her foot slams her back-and-forth against the ground and throws her in the air a good thirty feet. Motoko quickly gains her balance, but only to be headbutted in the chin. The stranger then does a frontal somersault kick, pummeling Motoko back down to the earth, creating a wide crater. He comes back down away from the crater with everyone else staring at him. Motoko rises from the debris, sheathes her sword and back-flips out of the crater and leaps off a tree towards the stranger, aimed about where his gut is.
"Hmph, you disappoint me." He sheathes his sword and positions himself to perform a quick slash.
Suddenly, Motoko begins to spin in midair. Fast.
"DOOMSDAY TYPHOON!" blue energy begins to surround Motoko in the form of a massive typhoon.
"WHAT!" The stranger is thrown off by the drastic change and quickly draws his blade in front of him to block the attack, but upon impact the blade shatters like glass, and the typhoon strikes the stranger dead in the gut.
He is sent flipping, twisting, spinning, and turning in every direction uncontrollably, straight into the hot spring's rocks.
Motoko walks to the front of the damaged hot springs with a disappointed look on her face.
"Stay down…it suits you."
She begins to walk away when she hears him beginning to stand, but falls onto his knees grasping his gut, coughing and wheezing, unable to breathe. He begins to cough out a torrent of blood, and at that point, the Hinata residents, except Motoko, ran to his assistance.
Keitaro ran inside, "I'll get an ambulance here"
SO…whadja think? I'm very nervous to know what you all think about it (hands trembling) PLEASE review ASAP good or bad!