28The siblings
-Risa Echizen - age 13 - DOB - December 24 (born premature and that's why she's so small)
-Suichi Echizen - age 12 - DOB - December 24
-Ryoma Echizen - age 12 - DOB - December 24
Disclaimer :I don't own these wonderful PoT characters
Warnings: a shounen ai/yaoi or m/m pairings and the charactersare probablyOOC though i try to make them as close the the original as possible.
Summary: what would happen if Ryoma had a twin brother named Suichi and an older sis named Risa? What would happen when Suichi and Risa who had been living in America came back for a visit and Suichi who like to sew and play tennis makes a bet or tricks Ryoma to be a girl again for a week and Suichi tries to be Ryoma at school? What would happen if they all looked identical and had the same birthday and showed up at Seigaku.
Pairings: MomoRyo, Goldenpair, TezuFuji, InuiKai, and im not sure about Taka-san yet. And I might or might not give the siblings a partner. Oh and a bit of SuichiMomo on the fact that Suichi will be Ryoma while Ryoma will be Syui-chan. Risa is just a big flirt who flirts with all the guys for fun
A/N: I need a permanent BETA for this story. Im looking for someone who is good at grammar and has patience to work with me. I need you to have some good imagination/ give suggestions of how to improve the storyline. Even though I pretty much have the story figured out up to a certain point, I need Reviews and ideas on how I can add to the story and to finish it. If you would like to have the position please e-mail me at
Now on to the fic...(italics In the story are chracter thoughts and author's notes)
Enjoy!
The Echizen Siblings
It was the middle of August when Suichi decided that he wanted to go back to japan to visit his twin brother and his parents. He had been away from his brother for too long. He missed playing all those games of tennis with his dad and Ryoma.
Since he had been living in America for so long he had gotten better then Ryoma at tennis. It was a fact that Suichi had more talent in tennis than Ryoma even if they were identical twins. But, even though he had more talent he wasn't as serious about tennis as Ryoma. He would rather sit at his desk and sew nice clothes (mainly dresses for girls, or whenever Ryoma was around to try and get him to model it for him). It was something the three Echizen children knew. Suichi and Ryoma always tried to get the other to wear the newly made dress or girly outfit that Suichi had made. Although, Ryoma wore the dress more times then Suichi. Usually once the dress was on, they would have to try their best to become a girl to fool others into thinking there were two girls in the Echizen family and that Suichi was Ryoma. Their parents had gotten used to their sons' unusual activities. The boys had been doing it since they were five when Suichi had first learned about sewing and made his first dress (although most of the time his mother would be the one to fix it up to actually look like a dress).
Their father just shrugged it off every time and took pictures for blackmailing. He figured that it was their life and they could embarrass themselves all they wanted. He was just gonna go along for the amusement.
Now their sister Risa loved tennis just as much as Ryoma did. She also missed her fun with her twin little bros. All those nights of tennis competitions to see who was better or who could get the most points off their dad, were something she would never forget. She was kinda upset at the fact that Suichi wanted to stay behind another year to say goodbye to all his friends but, being the kind big sister that she was, she stayed behind to make sure he was ok.
Risa thought that it was quite amusing that her brothers would sometimes switch rolls and have Ryoma wearing a dress and be a girl. She also thought that Ryoma was getting quite good at being a girl (besides the fact that he was just so Kawaii in a dress). She had always wanted a little sister so she often helped Ryoma try to win his bet at being a girl and so that she would have a way to have a little sister(much to the annoyance of Ryoma). Since her mother had refused to have any more children, she settled for having a sister through Ryoma (though he was none too thrilled at that).
Now to this day all three children have always looked quite a bit alike. Considering two was identical twins and all of them looked quite girlish. Risa had always been a bit short for her age along with her brothers but she more than them was short. She was only 2 cm taller then both boys so they were often mistaken for triplets. None of them really minded since they were very close, unlike most siblings. So, they let people believe what they wanted not bothering to change their minds. Besides it wasn't their fault they all looked alike and were all about the same height. It just happened that way and they had to get used to it.
Ryoma was just lounging around the house, at about the same time, thinking of his brother and sister who were living in America right now. He was thinking of all the times he had been tricked into wearing Suichi's latest dresses and dared or tricked into being a girl for a week or two. Risa had found it adorable and perfect since she had wanted a little sister but never got one and never will, so she would more often then not help him out.
It has gotten to the point now where he can actually become the girl and forget the fact that he is a boy. One thing about being the girl, he wasn't allowed to speak. In fact it was to the point that when he was Syui-chan(the girl) he wouldn't know how to talk. It was like he had forgotten how to talk. He had tried to talk the last time he had beet tricked into being the girl, but he couldn't. No sound would pass through his lips even when he laughed. It was weird but, he was ok with it since it prevented him from slipping the fact that he wasn't really a girl. They had tried talking while he was in the dress for the first time and acted like Syui-chan for the first time but, it had backfired and he had gotten laughed at. That was when he had stopped talking as Syui-chan all together and I guess since he was tricked into being a girl 70 percent of the time a new dress was made he had gotten accustomed to not talking. (A/N: It might also explain the reason for him not talking much as a boy as well. Although it could also be that he didn't care to speak unless there was something he really wanted to say. Oh and the other 30 percent Suichi would be the one dressing and Acting as a girl. He isn't as good as Ryoma now but he can do it.)
Ryoma wouldn't admit it to anyone, except for maybe Risa, but he kind of enjoyed being Syui-chan for the main fact that he didn't have to care about what people thought or have to keep up his reputation. He could freely show his feelings and emotions and not have to worry about anyone thinking of him as weird. Also, because of this he was Gay. Yes he was gay and so was Suichi. But Suichi was different, he wasn't just Gay he was Bi. He loved Girls and he loved Guys. Gender meant nothing to Suichi. As long as he liked them, that's all there needs to be. I guess you could blame our father the pervert for us being Gay. He was always showing us these pictures of rankly girls in bikinis or whatever and it always grossed us out. So when we started getting hormones, Guys would look far more appealing than girls. Every time we saw a girl we would think of those ugly pictures in our father's picture books. Although Suichi did find out later on that girls weren't so bad but he still liked guys too. So, Suichi became Bi and I stuck with Guys. I never did date or have any crushes, but I always found guys better to be around.
Anyway while im sitting here thinking of how much I miss my siblings the phone is ringing and no one is bothering to pick it up. Oh, wait they are all out right now sigh just my luck I start to think of all the fun I had with my siblings and how much I miss them and I get interrupted
"Moshi Moshi, Echizen Ryoma desu"
"RYOMA! Guess what?!"
"EH?! Suichi?! What? What is it?" Suichi always had the ability to scare the crap out of me when he felt like it. Like now for instance.
"Im coming to japan for a week and I need mom and dad to come get me and Risa from the airport tomorrow. Think you can do that for me?"
"EH?! You're coming home? When did you and nee-chan decide this? Aren't you in school?"
" Ha Ha we live in America, Ryoma, school is different here than it is there. School doesn't start for another month. Anyway I got to go now. Ja na!"
"Ah I forgot. Ok. sweat drops Ja!" Suichi is so not gonna let me off with that one.
Ryoma groans and goes back to his bed where he lays there thinking about what his brother is probably gonna do to him when he gets here and how much his sister is gonna wanna play him to see how much better at tennis she has gotten compared to him. He loves Risa and all but she's as crazy about tennis as he is and sometimes it can be quite annoying. She also loves to encourage Suichi with his tricking me into being the girl every time, just so she can have a sister around for a little while.
A/N: ok I know this isn't very good but this is the first chapter. im not sure how the next chapter will work but I will try. and im not sure when I will decide to get to it lol. I know Ryoma is probably OOC even though I try to make him as close to the character as I can.
A/N 2:Ryoma's silence is like Taka-san's burning mode. Ryoma can whisper to his brother's and anyone else's ear when Syui-chan because that wont give anything away so even though I don't write it in next chapter, RYoma tells Suichi who each regular is even though each regular will introduce themself.
anyways next chappie will see Ryoma in a dress in front of the tennis team and Suichi as Ryoma making the regulars think Ryoma has gotten better and in the process freaking the team out as Ryoma(Suichi) introduces his twin Syui-chan(Ryoma). Of course they don't know Syui-chan is really Ryoma
small bit of what to expect WHAT?! you have a sibling? And, your sibling just happens to be your twin?!
I will have chapter 3 be where he introduces his sister Ryoma has another sibling? maybe his triplet? all 3 siblings will show up at the courts and all 3 play tennis.
oh and side note - Syui-chan has a slightly different playing style than Ryoma. Syui-chan can do some acrobatics and some new made up moves that Syui-chan cant do as Ryoma. its like taka-san with his racket. he doesn't always remember what happens when in burning mode so Ryoma doesn't always know what he does playing tennis as Syui-chan. most of the time its just with tennis that he doesn't remember what he does except for the fact that he won or lost. Oh and Echizen is in love with Momo and Momo is in love with Echizen but neither knows the other Loves them. Yet that is.
heh heh bring on the craziness!