25Ok so here is my second fan fic. It takes place in modern times. It's about an 18 year old named Konzen. His parents are dead and he lives with his step mom. He ends up getting a little brother who is 16 and goes by the name Goku. Goku lived in a foster home for six years and can't remember what life was like outside of the foster home. OK lets start...
Disclaimer: I do not own Saiyuki and all that jazz.
Chapter 1 - The Surprise
Konzen was a very rich older teen. He lived with his step mother, seeing as his mother had died giving birth to him. Later his father had died in a car crash. But besides that he lived pretty good life. His step mother treated him like a prince. He was rich and lived in a HUGE mansion. He is and has always been an only child. In school he was very popular, he got perfect scores and was the top student and athlete.
We start out with a normal day at Konzen's house. The young man slept soundly in his bed.. His alarm clock struck 6:00am and the buzzer when off to wake him up. Konzen moaned while rolling over to turn off the clock. He sat up and looked round his dark room. He was about 5'10". The room was well kept; every thing was where is was supposed to be. He looked at his calendar, which told him today was Monday. He ran his fingers through his long golden hair and got out of bed to get ready for school.
He made his way to his dresser and got his school uniform out, which consisted of a Chinese style white shirt with black boarder around it and some black pants. He went in to the bath room to get dressed. He pulled his shirt over his head and buttoned his pants. He then looked in to the mirror and saw his face, a very bored looking face. Konzen was always bored, even blase. His life was so perfect it was just boring. He always go his way so there was never very much conflict in his life. So he was bored.
He brushed his long hair and tied it in to a loose pony tail with his bangs hanging by the sides of his face. Konzen when down stairs for breakfast, and, like always, his step mom was in the kitchen making pancakes.
"Oh, Konzen dear good morning," she said with a sweet smile. "Sit and have some pancakes. Oh and here is your lunch." she said handing Konzen his obento box.
"Thanks," Konzen said. He liked his step mom. She had always been there for him and was more like a sister at times than a mom.
He ate his breakfast quickly and got up to leave. "Oh, Konzen, please be home on time, I have a surprise for you." his step mom said to him.
"What kind of surprise?" Konzen asked suspiciously.
"Oh, you'll have to wait to find out. So be home on time..." his mother answered him in a sing-song tone of voice.
"Whatever..." Konzen grunted. "I'm out of here. I will be home right after school." he said shutting the door right behind him.
Konzen's school was about two blocks from his house. One of the few things he enjoyed durring his day was his nice walk to school. He was alone and did not have to be bothered by anyone but himself. He walked along by himself enjoying the fresh air and silences of the morning.
"Why, hello Konzen," His silence was broken by his friend Tenpou. "How are you doing this fine day?" Tenpou asked.. Tenpou had dark brown hair that when to his shoulders. He wore glasses and was the smartest kid at there school.
"God, what do you want?" Konzen snapped.
Tenpou giggled at Konzen's response. "Well its nice to see you too! So anything new going on with you?"
"No." Konzen grunted in a surly tone.
"Are you sure about that?" Tenpou asked smiling slyly.
"Yeah, why?" Konzen asked suspiciously.
"Oh, nothing..." Tenpou said readjusting his glasses.
Just then Konzen and Tenpou were put in to a headlock by another member of there posse. "Hey, guys!" Konzen's other 'friend' said with a smile.
"Hello, Kenren," Tenpou said slipping out of the headlock.
"Get the F... off me," Konzen said ripping Kenren off him.
Kenren just laughed.
They waked to school together, laughing and joking. Well, at least Kenren and Tenpou joked.. When they got to school they were greeted by everyone they passed. Tenpou and Konzen were the top students at the all boy's school. Kenren was just popular. So they were treated with the utmost respect.
So Konzen's day went on slowly. He sat with Tenpou and Kenren at lunch. He was treated like a king in all his classes. He always had a group of people around him pretending to be his friend.
Finally he got out of school at about 3:00 and went straight home.
"Konzen, welcome home!" his mother greeted him. "Get in the car. Its time to pick up your surprise."
"Yeah, yeah im going," he said opening the door to the can and sitting in the passenger seat.
"Oh, I'm so excited.. Your going to love it!" his mother said like a child would.
"Sure," Konzen grunted.. "So where are we going?" he asked as his mom pulled out of the diveway.
"You'll have to see!" she said with a big grin on her face.
"Ch," was his response. They drove for about and hour utill they got to a big building that looked like a huge house.
"Here," his mom said. She got out and opened the door for Konzen
'What could possibly be here that I want?' he though to himself.
"Come on, honey, lets go," she said dragging Konzen up to the door. She knocked and they waited for about half a minuet until a young lady with brown hair opened the door. "Hi! We are here to pick up the kid." His mother said to the lady.
"What?" Konzen yelled at his mom. "What kid!" "Why, he's your new little brother." His mom said with a smile. "I thought you needed one so I adopted one. I made sure he was about your age so you could hang out with him and all that fun stuff."
"I don't need a brother!" Konzen shrieked defensively.
"Oh just give it a try!" his mother said guiding him into the house.
Konzen just fumed. 'A brother, you gotta be kidding me...' he thought to himself.
The lady when to the back of the house to get the new boy. Konzen said nothing.
"This is going to be great. He is supposed to be about 16. Now you'll have somebody to play with, Konzen!" his mother said. At times, she still treated Konzen like he was 8 years old.
The lady finally came back with a boy about 5'4" and had short brown messy hair. The boy walked up to Konzen shyly. "Ummm...hi," he said with blush in his cheeks. "My name is Goku. What is yours? Are you my new brother?" Goku asked.
Konzen said nothing, and just stared in to the golden eyes of the boy in front to him. His mother looked like she was about to explode with joy.
Goku reached up and held some of Konzen's blond hair in his small hand. "It's soo shiny!" He said giving the hair a good tug ripping out a few strands. "Oops, sorry!" Goku said with a cute smile.
Konzen twitched twice then lunged at the small boy in front of him yelling inappropriate things while Goku wailed about how sorry he was. "Oh, they get along so well!" Konzen's mother said with tears of joy in her eyes. The foster lady just sweat dropped.
Well how is this so far? Well I hope you all read and reply!