7This is a pleasant poem about the basic Shoma is my first…thing so please review and tell me about how I did.
My Terrible Curse
The path of my life is long
Where it ends is unknown
My curse
My terrible curse
I must repel and avoid those that I love
Though I must repel I still may love
But what is the point
I will live long and alone for all eternity
Forevermore unhappy
This is my curse
My terrible curse
My undying unwavering curse
To fill the void left by my unneeded love is hatred rage and fear
Hatred and rage that will not last a millennium by to the end of time itself
Hatred and rage that will never die no matter what you do or say
And fear that will last but may soon be washed away
To be taken up by love
Love that I never knew existed
My curse
My terrible curse
May soon
Be lifted
And I will at last be able to live
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