What would Jude do if she found that Tommy was cheating on her?

Come on Girls what would you do …. Trash his precious Viper Maybe?

Disclaimer – I do not instant star or the song Before He Cheats

Song - Before He Cheats - Carrie Underwood


It was 12 Midnight and Jude sat on her couch at home.

" He's late again she thought" she thought as she rolled her eyes and sighed

She thought maybe that he was just working late on something for that new all girl band he was working with. Not that she liked that much but she trusted Tommy, it was the lead singer Becky she didn't trust.

Tricky the Tramp is a much better name for her and what she like to call her when no one was listening she knew that she was out for her Tommy. Tommy was doing so good lately, they hadn't had a fight of any kind in over 6 months, for them that was more like 3 years.

Jude chuckled darkly as the thought of what got them to this point and what they had to agree between them to get here. She hated to think what she might do if something were to happen now. One thing she did know was that Tommy was Tommy and that no matter what they could make it through anything.

Ten minutes into her musings about Tommy the trick and herself, she was unsurprised to see Kwest calling her phone.

"…. Jude…. now don't overreact" He said hesitantly …. "It's not as bad as your thinking" He said this like he was trying to calm down a raging bull.

"What is it Kwest spit it out" Jude said in a bored tone as she pulled on her boots and zipped them up harshly.


"Kwest?... hello?...WHAT DID HE DO NOW!? …. Out with it!" she could almost hear him flinch over the phone and pull the phone away from his ear at her screaking

He had cheated on her and that bitch led him right in the wrong direction Jude knew she couldn't leave him alone with her. That cunt was just a Venus fly try waiting for its prey and the right moment, SNAP!

Tommy he would forgive but he had to for pay this one, she was not going to let him off this easy and deep down she knew that little trick had pushed herself on him. She walked into her hall closet and pulled out her Louisville slugger from when she was on a softball team. She pulled her leather jacket from the hanger put in on and then grabbed her dark ray bans, stopped to put on some ruby red lipstick and grabbed keys by the door completing her "Your girlfriend is Mad As Hell" look. Jude sped down the street to the studio running a few lights because who's looking at 12 at night anyway. Jude arrived at the studio and stopped in the alley way where dear lil Tommy left his precious Viper. Jude got out of her Vintage Mustang got a firm grip on her key, sauntered up the side of his car and pulled it all the way down the pretty paint. Then she took a pocketknife she had on her keys and cut her name into his leather seat to make it very clear who had been here, stabbed all four of the tires so he couldn't rush of in a rage and then lastly went back for good ol' louis to smack both of his very nice very expensive headlights. Tommy wasn't going anywhere unless it was with her tonight that was for sure. She slowly stepped away from her handy work smiling and put her tools into her car. Jude walked into the studio and spotted Kwest.

" Hee..ey Jude what are you doing here? He said nervously as he spotted her wicked look.

"What was that noise did you see what made it?" Kwest asked her as she walked through the door.

" Hey Kwest tell, Mr. I have Screws for brains" to get to my record both I have a song that he might like to…. wait you know what I think I will tell him myself" she screamed as she stepped into the recording studio and looked down at Tommy who instantly got up off the floor.

" JUDE What are you doing here!?" Tommy said in a panicky voice

" I think the Question is what are YOU doing HERE?" Said Jude in an outraged half-crazy voice

Finally, Becky spoke up " You know he is a grown man who is not married he can do what he want's"

" I don't think I was speaking to you Tricky the Tramp," She finally said out load. Tommy cocked one eyebrow up at her Jude then look over at him " don't you cock eyebrow you're at me. You in a lot of trouble with me right now. Jude signed deeply looking deeply pained and tired

"Tommy you know that I still love you right" she turned to Tommy and smiled

"Jude…" Tommy Started as he pulled away from the smile

"that smile scars me, she's up to something I don't like that look…. I know that look.. oh shit" Tommy thought and got up to follow up her while sweat started to form on his brow.

" Tommy you are going to have to pay for this one before I forgive you so don't even start just get Tricky out of here before I lose my cool and punch her in till she needs a face lift. By the way I have a song that I want to record so just get ready ok. Tommy walked cautiously over to his seat and prepared himself for the beating that this song was about to give him

"OH, please you Prude bitch you wouldn't last one minute with me" Tricky said as she picked her long disgusting talons.

Judge turned with her hands raised to knock her out as tommy grabbed her around the waist

"Jude, Jude ...let's just go and record the song huh? Forget her she's a slut anyway ok she basically through herself at me and I tripped" Tommy begged

Jude whipped around to Tommy "Tom, don't start that lets just record the song k?" Jude was still smiling.

"fuck she's scary when she's like this!" Tommy's considered stressfully

Tommy and Judge walked slowing into Studio B and Jude hurriedly put on her headphones.

"Ok start when you ready Jude"

You know whatever you are going to do to make me pay could you just do it quickly, I deserve it I don't know what I was thinking letting her put her hands on me even if she pushed herself on me I shouldn't have let it get that far."

Jude her the sadness of his own failure in his voice, it almost made her feel sorry for what she did…. almost, but not really.

"That's good Tommy but I already did and you will find out soon enough what it is now let's record shall we" She started up on her guitar with that I am really really pissed right now sound.

Right now, he's probably slow dancing with a bleach blonde tramp,

and she's probably getting frisky...

right now, he's probably buying her some fruity little drink cause she can't shoot whiskey...

Right now, he's probably up behind her with a pool-stick, showing her how to shoot a combo...

And he don't know...

That I dug my key into the side of his pretty little suped up 4-wheel drive,

carved my name into his leather seat...

I took a Louisville slugger to both head lights,

slashed a hole in all 4 tires...

And maybe next time he'll think before he cheats.

Right now, she's probably up singing some

white-trash version of Shania karaoke.

Right now, she's probably saying "I'm drunk"

and he's a thinking that he's gonna get lucky,

Right now, he's probably dabbing on 3 dollars' worth of that bathroom polo...

And he don't know...

That I dug my key into the side of his pretty little suped up 4-wheel drive,

carved my name into his leather seat,

I took a Louisville slugger to both head lights,

slashed a hole in all 4 tires...

And maybe next time he'll think before he cheats.

I might've saved a little trouble for the next girl,

Cause the next time that he cheats...

Oh, you know it won't be on me!

Ohh... not on me...

Cause I dug my key into the side of his pretty little suped up 4-wheel drive,

carved my name into his leather seat...

I took a Louisville slugger to both head lights,

slashed a hole in all 4 tires...

Maybe next time he'll think before he cheats.

Ohh... Maybe next time he'll think before he cheats...

Ohh... before he cheats...

She finished as Tommy looked at her flabbergasted, he had not seen her this mad in a while it was a bit more frighting then he was even thinking before.

"Well Tommy I think I will be leaving now that I got that of my system"

" Out of your system how can you be over it that quickly I know you. You must take that out somewhere usually on me I might add before you are done being mad besides, we need to talk about this If we are going to work it out. You love me and I still love you I just had I moment of Temporary Insanity" he said trying the lighten the mood

" Cute, but trust me we will work it all out just not now we'll talk about this tomorrow after you have time to cool off"

"Me aren't you the mad one here" Tommy looked at her confused

"Yes, but by the time you get outside you are going to be mad as well" Jude pick up her keys and ray bans and turned to tommy grinning like a cat that got the cream.

Tommy thought about this then thought about the song and his face became so pale you would think he was frosty the snowman.

" Jude you didn't? " He said choking up as the truth of what she had done dawned on him.

"Maybe, but when you find out for sure I will be long gone back to my house" she said as walked out the door smirking as she heard Cursing so loud it could be heard all the way down the street. Then she got in her car and drove home.

Sure, she would forgive him because she loves him, and he was basically dragged into a trap but for now he would have to pay literally. As she got to her car, she could see Tommy by his car screaming many MANY curse words and literally tearing up. She had to admit that she had done her job well. Then for a second, she thought, "Maybe I over did it just a little with the tires…. NAH"

Ok so anybody who read this many many years ago I apologize I did not proofread this …. like at all as I am coming to find out lol.

I came back to this story as I am trying to revive my love of writing, I need a creative outlet, and this is it. I don't know if ill redo my other stories or what new ones I will write yet I will be posting my original stories on Wattpad at some point, but I couldn't help coming back to my first writing home. I would appreciate some feedback as I changed a few elements of the original story, not by much though lol.

If you made it this far down thank you for reading, just as before read and review any feedback would be appreciated 😊