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I'm sorry to say, I don't think I'm going to finish this one. If there's enough people that want me to continue with this specific storyline then I shall.

BUT I'm alerting my readers that as far as right now I'm revising it in another fic with a bit of a different storyline I thought would be better.

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Here's the link to the revised version, called Trials of a Ninja:

s/5622363/1/Trials_of_a_Ninja

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And ofcorse I'm going to respond to my readers before I fully abandon this version lol. So heres my replys-


Polish: thanks for the input, I agree I'm not doing anymore bold typing lol. Looks terrible. I'm sorry to say though that I don't plan to continue or edit this storyline unless I get enough people requesting so. Otherwise I'm revising it to a generally different storyline with the same basics I had for this one. If you'd like to read the revised please go to the link above, and if you'd still like me to update and edit this just request. =)

beotch: XDD thanks I'm glad I could humor you

FrozenSkies: yeps pretty much xD but the story to how he got married, who it is, where she is, and why is what I think is ganna be loved the most by my readers and fellow Kakashi lovers. ^^ That plot will also be in Trials of a Ninja, so you should go to that one as well.

Sesshou's ward: lol no I didn't but I hoped ^^ buuut sadly as you can see my good friend I'm murdering this version. =c unless I get some requests. Can't not give the people what they want. xD Either way I think the revised version is a bit better, a bit more serious but better rounded. Again though its up to the readers. ^^

: yes I realize Kakashi wasn't born with the Sharigan, he's not a Uchiha or carries any blood. It's just a small part of my plot. I realize my story doesn't make much sense yet but I promise i've brain stormed my work with several people to give the best material I can to my readers. I ask you and my other readers to please keep faith in me. =)

purple puma: Thanks! I feel terrible that I'm denying your request, but if you still want an update of ROTL now or after you check out Trials of a Ninja then tell me so and I may. ^^

Gothic Tigress: I'm glad I've got you thinking. I love that element of writing. =3 Again as I've been telling my other readers and reviewrs I'm pretty much murdering this version unless still requested to be edited and updated(no bold type lol). You should check out the revised version in another fic post above, its captures the same element more thoroughly and I think is better rounded. But I'd like to know what you think so please let me know.

Keiko-Shinai: I knooow. I'm terribly sorry about the typos, I didn't take care of this fanfic like I should've. it's been neglected terribly. =c and yeah I realized that a while after writing it and taking in the reviews. I need to tone down the spazzy although people seem to like to some degree so I'm giving you guys the option to have me continue this,the new one or both. XD! thanks, I've always loved the cliffhangers and hated when the writers didn't update ever (like me). ; but alright. I'll also pm you ^^ I'd like to check out your work too. I'm sure by now (since it took me forever to get to my writing again) you've got great work

Chelsey/ Chemo: XD lol you will endure my cliff hangers! Endure them FOREVER! XD but yes. you must also check out the revise. Because its great. Orgasmic even.


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Okies, thats it for this. As I've said, please tell me what you want. If you want me to continue this anyways, please tell me in a review or pm. Otherwise feel free to go check out the revise Trials of a Ninja. it's quick summery is right here.

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2 brother jonin, the curious existing sons of Kakashi go through their new lives as ninjas as they cop with the typical trials of becoming a ninja, the murder of their mother, and a skitso younger brother that wants them dead in the assumption that they killed her.

Who killed her? Who was she? So many things are left to be answered in this fanfiction filled with twists and annoying cliff hangers. Enjoy.