18Just an AxA story. please R&R
Atlanta turned and ran as fast as she could to her room, frantically trying to escape from whatever that was chasing her. Once in her room at the brownstone, she quickly locked the door and sat on her bed, a triumphant look spread across her face, until she saw the shadow of a man behind her on the wall. Atlanta turned around slowly. She wished she could have some of Neil's luck, of course, not being Neil turned around only to find the man she was running from.
"Crap" thought Atlanta as he leaned in and, tickled her? Atlanta shrieked as none other than Archie tickled her mercilessly.
"Archie how the hell did you get in here"! Atlanta said between breaths.
"Through the window" Archie simply replied, continuing his battle with Atlanta. "You should shut it more often".
Atlanta was running out of breath, and as much as she loved having Archie this close to her she hated being tickled. Atlanta viscously thought of a strategy to get Archie off of her. She soon came up with a plan A and a plan B. For plan a, she tried karate move Theresa had taught her that day during training. She wound her legs around Archie's neck and attempted to fling him off of her self, but soon realized he was much to heavy.
"I'm not that light am I?" Archie said as he watched Atlanta, the huntress, remain captured. 'If this is the way he wants to have it, so be it'. Atlanta thought. 'Time for plan b'.
" Archie, if you really love me, you will stop that right now!" Atlanta said panting. To her surprise Archie stopped what he was doing, and looked down at her surprised and somewhat shocked face. 'Wait does this mean he loves me' Atlanta thought hopefully. As an answer to her questions Archie opened his mouth to speak.
"I stopped".
So what do you think? I know it is kinda' crapy, but i gave it a shot didn't i? Should I leave it at that, continue on, or just forget about the story altogether 'cause it sucked that bad. It's my first story and I had the inspiration from Draykor's 'A, B, C's' please, please, PLEASE review. Be brutally honest. I can take it. It will make me a better author if you do. Luv always
Aveline