2Hehe, my first NaruNaru story Ok it's really called Naruto, but I call it NaruNaru, get off my back! But read the story. There is drama and humor...maybe a little romance, but not that much. Probably between Neji and Tenten and possibly Sasuke and one of my OC's...or Sasuke and Hinata...I haven't really decided. But I refuse to put Sakura with anyone, there will be mild Sakura and Ino bashing in this story so if you actually like those characters then I advise that you leave this story.
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Here in our world, Camryn and her friend Jessica were at the local park, doing some strange ritual that was suppose to open a portal to another dimension. Camryn was just finishing lighting the candles when Jessica finally decided to speak.
"I don't know Camryn...do you think we should be doing this?" she asked, fidgeting nervously as her friend was just about to light the last candle. Camryn giggled and ruffled Jessica's hair, she always had second thoughts about everything, even deciding between paper and plastic at the store.
"Come on Jess," she started, putting on a pleading look, "Don't back out now, haven't you ever been curious to if there really is another world out there?" Camryn asked taking Jessica's hands and leading her to the circle where they both needed ot stand to perform the ritual. Jessica glanced around the park nervously, afraid people might be staring.
"Well, what if someone sees us? They'll tie us up to poles and burn us chanting 'Witches! They're witches, burn them!'" she started breathing heavily, ready to run for cover when Camryn got a firm grip on her wrist to stop her from running away.
"Jess...it's three in the morning," Camryn said, running her fingers through her, recently died, purple-bluish hair. Why did she have to have such a worry-wart as a best friend? She would have to bound and gag her to get her to do anything remotely interesting (Jessica calls it 'life-threatening' but it's all good fun to Camryn)
"There is no one here, and even if there was, do you think they would stop to pay attention to what we were doing?" she asked, trying desperately to calm her friend down. Jessica stopped struggling and turned toward Camryn, her dark green eyes stairing back into Camryn's deep blue ones. She then sighed and stepped back into the circle, there was no point in going against Camryn. One way or another she finds how to always get her way, that girl was too stubborn for her own good.
"Ok Cam..." Jess said, sitting cross-legged. "If you're sure we won't get hurt, then ok," she said.
"Well..." Camryn started, scratching her head nervously as she sat down by her friend, "I can't promise we won't get hurt...there's always the disappointment that there is no other world," she laughed softly at her own joke, an attempt to lighten the mood. She, again, ruffled Jessica's dark brown hair, earning a groan of annoyance from Jessica.
"Well, let's start this baby up!" Camryn cheered as Jessica was attempting to straighten out her hair, that Camryn just completely messed up. They joined hands and began focussing all their energy, trying desperately to tear the fabric between time and space as Camryn began the chant.
"Power of light and darkness, sun and moon, earth and sky, water and fire, I call upon thee. Please lend us your strength and come to our aid. We give our energy in hopes of opening the portal to a new world. Portal...OPEN!" Camryn shouted as they began to rise from the ground, a birght light surrounding both of them as they both felt the energy being drained form them. It was working, soon they would open the door to a new world.
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Back in Konaha, Naruto, Sasuke, Neji, Hinata and Tenten were waiting for the rest of the team to arrive. It was 3:15am, they were assighed to escort a Fuedal Lord over to a neighboring village. Now if only Sakura and Ino would hurry their butts over, so they could actually start the mission before sunrise.
"Hey!" they heard a cry that could only belong to Sakura. The five of them turned around to see Sakura and Ino running over as fast as they could with, what looked like, three bags...each! How long did they think this mission was going to be? Probably one-two days tops.
Sasuke and Neji sighed, why do girls always have to pack so much stuff? It's one of the many mysteries of women they will never know.
"Sorry we took so long guys," Sakura gasped inbetween breaths.
"Yeah, we couldn't decide between purple and pink, so we just got both," Ino said, laughing nervously, showing the gang what they bought. They were pink and purple tank-tops. ((Insert anime-fall here))
Figures, the shopping duo, can't decide form the exact same shirts. Typical Sakura and Ino.
Everyone sighed in annoyance, except Hinata who's way too nice to do anything except smile awkwardly. ((Insert anime-sweatdrop here))
"Can we just start this mission now?" Naruto whined, "The sooner we finish this stupid mission, the sooner Iruka-sensei can but me some ramen," he said, starting to leave the gates. Just then a streak of blinding light shined above their heads and they all got sucked up into the sky. They all started screaming as they were falling to their death ((or so they thought))
- Their boddies began to burn as the outline of their circle they drew in the grass started rise above their heads, it started spinnign faster and faster and suddenly Camryn and Jessica were thrown out of the circle, nearly all the way across the park. Camryn was the first to get up and ran to Jessica's aid, she had been knocked out cold.
"Jessica? Jessica, wake up! Are you alright?" she called to her friend, shaking her shoulders violently, then looked up at the circle still spinning. Suddenly, the circle began to widen, covering nearly half the park, still spinning faster and faster with each passing second. Then a flash of light, nearly blinding Camryn, shot out of the circle. She heard a few thuds, then the circle disappeared; Jessica was finally starting to wake up and they both ran over to see what happened to the circle.
Once they reached over to where their circle used to be, they both gasped at what they saw. Seven boddies laying there, just...laying there, they weren't moving and from what Jessica could tell, there was no sign of breathing.
"A-Are they d-dead?" Jessica asked, eyes widden with fright. Camryn just stood there, still in shock from this whole situation. After a couple of minutes, Jessica started shaking her shoulder.
"Cam? Are you alright?" she asked. Finally, snapping back to her senses, Camryn walked over to the pile of bodies and started poking them, trying to see if they were dead or not.
"CAMRYN!" Jessica shouted, "What are you doing?!" she asked running over toward her friend. Camryn just shrugged, "Well, I can't tell if they're dead or not," she stated like it was the most obvious thing in the world. "If they are alive, then we can't just leave them ou-"she stopped when she felt the weight under her finger tip shift. She jumped back in surprise, grabbing hold of her friend for dear life.
"J-Jessica!" Camryn stuttered, completely afraid of the 'thing' that just moved. "It moved!" she shouted, pointing.
The thing stared up at them, nothing but fear and confusion in 'it's' eyes. After a closer look, Camryn and Jessica concluded that this 'thing' was indeed a girl. After a few moments of starring, she finally decided to speak.
"Who-who are you?" she asked, weakly as she tried to stand up, the energy drained from her voice. Camryn steadied her as Jessica stiil stood there, mouth open, eyes wide and finger pointing at the strange girl in fromt of them. Once this girl regained her balance, Camryn went on a rage of questions.
"Oh my gosh! This is unbelievable! Are you an alien? time travelor from the future? Or...or...AN ESPER?!" her questions continued on and on until Jessica stopped her.
"What I think she means is..." she started, glaring at Camryn, who just laughed nervously and took a step back. "Where did you come from?" she asked staring back at the strange girl in front of them.
She looked at them for a moment before she spoke.
"M-my..." she started, "My name is Hinata..." she trailed off, looking at the ground as if there was something interesting about it.
"Well it's nice to meet you Hinata!" Camryn cheered, "So, are all these dead beats your friends or what?" she asked, pointing over to the still unconscious bodies around them. Hinata stared, eyes widened with fright as she ran over to the bodies, shaking them roughly. She tried for about 10 minutes before she walked back over, tears pouring out of her eyes.
"Hey, what's wrong?" Camryn asked. Hinata wiped away her tears, but more soon followed after. Suddenly she just burst out crying, startling the two girls who were standing there watching.
Then, all of a sudden, there was a faint voice calling the strange girl's name.
"Hinata...?" it said, the voice sounded cracked and weak, but it kept going until there was a very loud gasp from Hinata.
"Neji?" she called turning to all the bodies. All three saw something stand up and Hinata ran over, engulfing the thing in a bear hug, crying histerically.
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Voila! The first chappie Waddya guys think? Too much...? Not enough detail? My OCs too strange for ya? Well, you can tell me in your reviews. Please don't flame, but construcctive critizism((SP?)) is always welcome!
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