The darkness circled around me. I was alone, well at least thats what it felt like. My name is Nightshadow. I am a night black she-cat with crimson eyes. I have a reddish tint in my long soft fur. My claws are a deep blood red. Everyone thought I was a curse. My mentor Lightheart hated me. The leader Goldstar made me a warrior, even though everyone didn't think I should have became one. My mom,dad,and my brother and sister hated that they had my blood running in their veins.
My mom was Cherrylight, a brownish silver she-cat with stunning blue eyes. My dad was Goldstar himself, a golden brown tom with green eyes. My brother was Thundercloud, a brownish gold tom with green eyes. My perfect little sister was the medicine cat Waterlily, a gloden silver she-cat with her moms stunning blue eyes.
I was always hated. I always ate last, getting the stale piece of pray that was like maybe a couple of days old. I was a real good fighter and hunter, but no one gave me a chance. I wish that I could get the tom of my dreams. The tom of my dreams is Lightingsoul, a yellow tom with electric blue eyes. He has white paws and a coffee colored tips tail. For once I wish i could be loved. For once I wish i could be trusted. For once...for once I wish that I was never born. For once.
Well here is another story. I hope it is good. Oh and thx i mean thanks for the people who gave me a COMMENT, flames do not count. Well PLEASE review. This is only my second story.