Just so everyone realizes I was in middle school when I wrote this (seeing as I graduated High School a few years ago), it was a long time ago. So if it is a little akward or immature ignore it. You chose to read it i don't need anyone asking if I'm old enough to be on this site, just 'cause they don't like this little one-shot. So keep your little reviews to yourself if you don't like it. I usually don't mind creative critasitism, but I mostly like it when people tell what they didn't like about the story so that I can work on it to make my next one better or fix the chapter/one-shot that they read.
Sorry for the rant but I hate it when people flame me without a real reason.
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