Hey! These are just some one shots/drabbles/story things that I will put here. I am not sure if I will continue Afterthought but I might. Constructive criticism helps and sorry but my grammar is not the best. In addition, I need help with not putting the wording in "passive voice." Can you tell me about any sentences here that are in passive voice that you think would sound better in non-passive voice? It is okay if you do not though! You can just read the story and (hopefully) enjoy it.
_Oh and if any one is wondering this story was inspired by the song in the video called : When she loved me. It's a video on Youtube about Syaron and Sakura. It was really nice and also ended with Syaron leaving. _
Come and catch me Syaoran!
He looked up and saw Sakura running towards Syaoran. Her hair was long and tied back with a pink ribbon. It bounced behind her as she ran. Her smile was big and bright and her eyes looked like two beautiful emeralds as she looked at the young man that loved.
"Come and catch me Syaoran!"
"Hai Sakura-sa…Sakura."
He looked at the beautiful girl and his mirror image chase each other as they laughed.
"Sakura you can Syaoran can flirt later the foods here!" Fai yelled laughing at the twos reaction.
He saw them as they went to the table together, shyly holding hands as they walked towards it. He saw Fai laughing and saying something to Kurogane that made him turn red with anger, and perhaps another emotion, and yell at him furiously. Fai then looked up and waved him over which made Sakura look at him too.
"Sharon come eat!" She yelled smiling her bright smile.
Smiling slightly at her he made his way down the small hill he had been sitting on and sat down at the table. The food was passed around and he continued to smile at everyone. He did not smile because he was happy but because he wanted her to be happy.
When everybody had eaten, he helped put away the things and walked away as hurriedly as possible.
"Sharon wait!"
"Yes Sakura-san?""You don't have to call me that!" She pouted cutely which cause him to laugh.
"You never told me how it was in California.""Oh it was hot and had a lot of palm trees."
They both grew silent before Sakura looked at his head and plucked out a few leaves that had fallen onto his head.
"You were always so messy. Remember when we were little and I had to climb over things just to see you?" she reached over to tuck apiece back in place and smiled. Her hand staying on his shoulder
"Yes I do." he said chuckling.
His heart rose when she did not mover her hand and his cheeks started to turn a light pink. He started to be remained of the times when he was happy and when she was his. Then she smiled and said "visit more often okay? I have to go now though I promised Syaraon Id help him with something."
She turned around and ran after her waiting Syaoran. He looked longingly and sadly at her. Never would he forget her face, she would always be in his heart. He got up and walked away towards his car. This place had become too much for him. He would leave and go back to that apartment he had in California. He sighed and got. Running away was something that he did not do but he still believed this was different. A sinHe shed a single tear for his unrequited love but he did not look back because he did not need to; the memories were still there. As bright and clear as the first time he experienced them.
I'm putting it as T because well I'm not sure about the ratings and some might contain violence.