Okay, so I've decided how I'm going to do this.
I've fixed the doubled chapter for this story, and I'm going to leave it up as is while I post the revised copy under a new name, Harteland.
I might take this down when I revise to the point this ends, or I might not. They will be very different, after all. Almost entirely different. Thus, those of you who actually like this trainwreck can enjoy it for quite a bit longer, and those of you who are interested in the rewrite can go check it out.
So yeah. Please, if you have any feedback on what you'd like to see fixed or any editing ideas, don't be afraid to pipe up. I love opinions and people talking to me.
EDIT: THE FIRST CHAPTER OF THE REMAKE HAS BEEN UPLOADED