6Ok, please bear with me this is my 1st fic, I'm not sure if it will be any good as fluffy stuff is not my strongest genre but I'll give it a go please leave a review and yes the angst comes 1st, this is un-Beta'd so mind my errors and feel free to point anything out
Taken apart at the seams:
Chapter 1; Can anybody hear me?
Isabella Swan sat in the rigid bright orange chair on the east side of the hospital waiting room her arms wrapped protectively around her torso. Silent tears streamed down her rosy cheeks staining them with sorrow. She was a plain girl with a gentle nature, mature for her 17years and a bit of a Klutz. She was here today because of HIM,
He was not worthy of a name, not worthy of life in Bella's eyes. All the nights she endured his drunken stumbling down the hallway as she curled into a ball to protect the most vunerable parts from the inevitable blows that would occur. Her mother did nothing to stop him, not even trying to protect her 'precious' girl from that monster. Until today.
It was a bright sunny morning only 7:45am and Bella could feel the heat already permeating the cool air of her bedroom, stiffly she arose from her bed wincing slightly at the new bruises forming on her back and legs. She entered her small bathroom turning on the water in her shower, she sighed lightly waiting for the water to warm then clambered in under the stream of liquid.
For 10 minutes she stood beneath the clear flowing water, washing her hair with her favourite shampoo and taking extra time to examine the previous night's souvenirs. It was a very mild beating and there were only 3 or 4 new bruises easily covered even in this heat, she shut off the water and hastily dried her hair throwing on a pair of dark blue denim jeans and a turquoise singlet she crept down the hallway and into the kitchen grabbing a pop-tart from out of the cupboard she picked up her rucksack and started out the door. Her School wasn't far from home only a 10 minute walk east, but this morning something felt out of place, she set the feeling of unease aside as she entered the institutional hell they liked to call the Public School System.
The day started typically for Bella, the usual sneers and taunts she had learned to ignore from an early age. It didn't bother her anymore after all they were only pathetic children who had nothing better to do with their time. As she entered 3rd period calculus she groaned inwardly it was her least favourite class all the numbers scrambled inside her head and she had trouble finding the correct formulas, it was hell for miss Bella. Ambling slowly to her seat in the back row she half listened to the conversations around her, nothing important ever happened around here the social calender was dry for the end of school year.
As she rummaged through her rucksack extracting the items needed for her class the intercom squealed and a nasally voice droned out from the speaker on the wall. "Isabella Swan please report to the student centre you have – uh visitors"? It said, Quickly the feeling of unease resurfaced as she packed away the items she had only momentarily removed and stood offering apologies to the bored looking teacher as she passed his student centre was on the opposite of the school only a short walk really, but a walk all the same, with time to imagine all sorts of scenarios none of which appealed to Bella.
Ok, Ok, I know its short and I'm sorry I promise the chapters will get longer and hopefully better, please review, and throw me any ideas you think will fit well with the story, I wanna know what you wanna read, any key characters you want POV's for any particular social events, I even wanna know if you want argument scenes … angst drama... hurt … soppy... lemony... just let me know and I'll work it in...
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