This is my first story and I completely love the stories on this but im bored of waiting for you lot to Update

so ive come up with this. Love or you hate it comment back please

A New Day

chapter 1 Darkness

Zoey Pov

"How could this happen! Why!why Heath," I screamed in my head I was floating in complete darkness. I had no sense of my surroundings. This dark place would make a sane person insane. I could`nt speak, I could only speak through my mind, and listen to my throughts echoing back to me. I guess this is what happens when Monks meditate."This scary why am I here". "Am I being punished for letting Heath die". I wanted to cry but I could`nt "mabey theres is a possiblty i`ve used up all my tears" I thought. I tried to move but I felt like I was flat on my back, and was being held down; like I was strapped to nothing , frozen stiff the only move I could make was for my mind to wonder. " Am I dead if so then why am I not with Heath? ,is this Hell? Goddess send me back to Heath!" I screached. The scene that I last witnessed while on Earth kept running through my head. Kalona twisting Heath`s neck and Starks voice screaming my name . Heath I missed him , I loved him , why him pf all of us he was the most pure, he remined me of my Human life. " I told him to stay away why did`nt he listen to me!" I screamed again he made me so mad."Why, why why! why could`nt he move on with his life! you stupid Human!" still I could`nt will myself to make a tear, had I seriously used them all up. If I was to wake up from this nightmare, and live a normal life. I would forget my Heath, my first love, then that would mean forgetting my human life." I will never ever forget Heath","at least he is happy and picked up a fishing hobby". My feel of relif for Heath brought back a tingerling feeling to my body, the only way could decribe it, it was like having pins and needles all over my body; And it hurts.

The darkness started to make a ripping sound. Then slowly it slowly started to crawl towards me."What is happening" my mental voice sounded weak. I shut my eyes and started to pray for my Goddess forgivenes, till I felt a tear roll down my cheek."Please let me wake". Those were my final words before I started to hear faint mumbeling. To frightend to open my eyes I tried to get back to praying, but it just wouldnt happen. "what the Hell, now my mind is on mute?", the mumbeling was starting to get louder, so I listend to it, and tried to organized them into possible sounds that I could get. It got louder until I couldnt help but open my eyes. There was no darkness, I could feel my body coming back to me. Instead of darkness there was colours, so I watched them form into shapes, the shapes moved to make the most perfect senery. A medow the mumbeling was turning into the sounds of birds singing in the distance. But still the perfect picture was incoplete. I still felt like I was being held down, I blinked and tryed to locate who was holding me. It was just a big blob of colours. different shades, just enough to make the an outline of a looked like a shadow but except this strange shadow had a coularge of colours. I focused on the shadow and its colours started to move around like a puzzel, fitting together to form features; eyes eye brows, a mouth. A person was holding me, the colours moved arouned up and down trying to find their correct slot, just like in Harry Potter the secert entrance to Diagon alley that crazy wall. I couldnt help but cry when I heard his voice, the colours transformed into my Heath.

What do you lot think should I continue to write more or forget it, review this please because I wont write again till ive got some comments on what you think, and i wont take forever to update ive already got the next chapter down =)