plz 2nd story so please help me and give suggestions ;) ok Max say it

Max: does not own Maximum Ride or Rozen Maiden in any way shape or form

Dialogue

Talking

thinking

? POV

OK I understand Rozen I will have all of the six ready for the flock.I thought to Rozen.

Good, now I will make the last one and the flock will find you soon explain all except that you know where I am. Also the next town you go to go to the furniture store and tell them that I sent you and you can take whatever you need but make sure to take the waist bag that can fit everything and anything in it so you can carry around all the parts and anything else also it will have the dolls cases in the bag as well. You are like them and you will fit in with them well. Rozen replied. It was true I am a Avian - human hybrid that lives in the school aN now is the apprentice to Rozen the doll maker I have the dolls that the flock will receive.

BOOM! yep that was them.

"Hey who are you?" a girl asked me I think she is the leader Max that Rozen told me about.

"My name is Alice and I am a avian - hybrid like you can I join your flock if that's ok?" I asked very scared that they might not accept me.

"Yea I think that's ok. Most of the other wont trust you for a while so don't be surprised. Let's get you out of here can you fly? I'm Max by the way." Max said.

"No, I can't sorry." I said biting my lip shivering in my cold small damp cell that didn't give me a lot of room to move much less my sliver - white - wings at all.

"No that all right let's move." Max said as she helped me up and put her arm around my neck and we got out side in about 20 minutes where I saw about five other people that had wings I got scared and hid behind Max.

"Hey Max who's her?" a small blond girl asked, while the tall strawberry - blond boy and a boy who looked to be family talked excitedly with. The other male who was in all black was in the corner looking at me in suspicion next to who looked like African - American girl going on and on about something.

"She's our new member Alice who has wings like us Iggy can you carry her since she can fly?" Max answered.

"Sure Max." the tall who looked blind from the color of his eyes who was Iggy.

"Ummmm hi." I said nervously looking at the ground.

"Can we trust her Max." the boy dressed in black asked, scanning head to toe.

"Fang if I can you can or at least give her the benefit of the doubt." Max said to Fang as we all(really the flock and me in Iggy's arms).

All Fang did was roll his eyes. I sighed this was not going to go well.

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