Okay people I understand if your mad or whatever but please refrain from being a bunch of jerks I asked for permission to write this and she gave me permission you can even ask her so if you have anymore comments like the ones being left just don't even bother! and here i will make you a deal if you can name 5 things similar in this one chapter that doesn't actually make sense for it to be in the story i will officially stop writing this story and never write another story that is even slightly similar to someone elses... so do you guys except this challenge?