The way Naruto is gonna talk is gonna like street/rap talk like when he says ''or'' it's gonna sound like a ''oh'' or like when he says ''th'' in a word
it's gonna come out as a ''D'' like ''that'' is gonna be ''dat' and ''My'' is gonna sound like ''Ma' and "your" is "yo".

Warning : He is not gonna be all super smart or godlike strong like my other fis.I assure you it's not gonna be like any other Naruto fic you have ever read well at least i haven't.


Strong Naruto

Street Smart Naruto

Badass Naruto

Talented Naruto


Gangsta Naruto



P.S the technology is higher so there will be cellphones and computers and TVs etc... and carriages are called cars

1 dollar = 1 Ryo

Ok let it start

A King's Freedom

Chapter two

When Naruto awoke in the morning, after having checked out of the motel, he went to the Hokage tower to talk to the old man and ask if he had a house that he could buy, i mean he did have over half a million to spend and still have another half a milion over.

Hokage Tower 10:47

When Naruto entered the tower the receptionist lady told him to wait in the waiting room. The room had nobody in it just chairs and a piano so
he decided to work on some new songs and took his IPhone, put it on a beat and on record, closed his eyes and said every word that came to

(The Way I Am By Eminem(I WILL NEVER OWN THIS))

"The Way I Am"

Dre, just let it run
Aiyyo turn the beat up a little bit
Aiyyo.. this song is for anyone.. fuck it
Just shut up and listen, aiyyo..

I sit back with this pack of Zig Zags and this bag
Of this weed it gives me the shit needed to be
The most meanest MC on this - on this Earth
And since birth I've been cursed with this curse to just curse
And just blurt this berserk and bizarre shit that works
And it sells and it helps in itself to relieve
All this tension dispensin these sentences
Gettin this stress that's been eatin me recently off of this chest
And I rest again peacefully (peacefully)..
But at least have the decency in you
To leave me alone, when you freaks see me out
In the streets when I'm eatin or feedin my daughter
To not come and speak to me (speak to me)..
I don't know you and no,
I don't owe you a mo-therfuck-in thing
I'm not Mr. N'Sync, I'm not what your friends think
I'm not Mr. Friendly, I can be a prick
If you tempt me my tank is on empty (is on empty)..
No patience is in me and if you offend me
I'm liftin you 10 feet (liftin you 10 feet).. in the air
I don't care who is there and who saw me destroy you
Go call you a lawyer, file you a lawsuit
I'll smile in the courtroom and buy you a wardrobe
I'm tired of arguin' (of arguin')..
I don't mean to be mean but that's all I can be is just me

[Chorus: Naruto]

And I am, whatever you say I am
If I wasn't, then why would I say I am?
In the paper, the news everyday I am
Radio won't even play my jam
Cause I am, whatever you say I am
If I wasn't, then why would I say I am?
In the paper, the news everyday I am
I don't know it's just the way I am

Sometimes I just feel like my father, I hate to be bothered
With all of this nonsense it's constant
And, "Oh, it's his lyrical content -
- the song 'Guilty Conscience' has gotten such rotten responses"
And all of this controversy circles me
And it seems like the media immediately
Points a finger at me (finger at me)..
So I point one back at 'em, but not the index or pinkie
Or the ring or the thumb, it's the one you put up
When you don't give a fuck, when you won't just put up
With the bullshit they pull, cause they full of shit too
When a dude's gettin bullied and shoots up his school
And they blame it on Marilyn (on Marilyn).. and the heroin
Where were the parents at? And look where it's at
Middle America, now it's a tragedy
Now it's so sad to see, an upper class ci-ty
Havin this happenin (this happenin)..
Then attack Eminem cause I rap this way (rap this way)..
But I'm glad cause they feed me the fuel that I need for the fire
To burn and it's burnin and I have returned


I'm so sick and tired of bein admired
That I wish that I would just die or get fired
And dropped from my label and stop with the fables
I'm not gonna be able to top on "My Name is.."
And pigeon-holed into some pop-py sensation
To cop me rotation at rock'n'roll stations
And I just do not got the patience (got the patience)..
To deal with these cocky caucasians who think
I'm some wigger who just tries to be black cause I talk
With an accent, and grab on my balls, so they always keep askin
The same fuckin questions (fuckin questions)..
What school did I go to, what hood I grew up in
The why, the who what when, the where, and the how
'til I'm grabbin my hair and I'm tearin it out
Cause they drivin me crazy (drivin me crazy).. I can't take it
I'm racin, I'm pacin, I stand and I sit
And I'm thankful for ev-ery fan that I get
But I can't take a SHIT, in the bathroom
Without someone standin by it
No I won't sign your autograph
You can call me an asshole I'm glad

[Chorus (except change first word "And" to "Cause")]

When Naruto was done without looking he pressed the "stop" button on his phone to stop it from recording and he opened his eyes he saw a crowed of shinobi staring.

Naruto walked out of the room and went to the Hokage's office, but on inside, he was pissed. A bunch of people heard one of his unreleased songs.

Once Naruto entered the office he saw his pops and a dude with a whack bowl-cut, giant moving eyebrows and wearing a green sissy suit.

"How you been old man?"

He asked. Hiruzen smiled and said "I am well Naruto-kun, i want you to meet Maito Gai, he will teach you a taijutsu style for three months and where did you get the tattoos?" "Oh these? well some dudes i knew in prison inked me up" Naruto said before he left with Gai.

Outside The Village

Naruto and Gai stood in front of each other and Gai said

"Ok from this day forth you will call me Gai-sensei, Naruto-kun and we shall run 100 laps around the village LET'S GO"

Gai started running leaving a trail of dust behind with Naruto doing the same.

Training Ground Five

Before getting to the training ground Gai told him to meet him there to which he gladly agreed to as a chance to smoke but he was not tired or anything but he was annoyed with the way Gai acts.

He got to the trees just outside the training ground before he threw away his second cig and walked into the training ground to see Gai there with what looked like plates of metal that can be tied together.

Gai said "This is where the real challenge begins Naruto-kun here put this weights around your legs" so Naruto did just that and put them in his jeans so that it can't be seen and felt his legs get a lot heavier but he could still manage easily.

While he moved around Gai thought 'Those are the same weights Lee uses seems he does have super-natural strength and it seems like i got to take it up few notches' and then he said.

"Naruto-kun lift up your legs, i am gonna put more weight in them" After that was done Naruto felt it kinda hard to move so Gai said.

"Naruto-kun for the next three months or maybe even after, should you decide to keep them you will be wearing those through our training"

Naruto nodded. "Good now let's do 500 push-up YOSH!"

And it went on like that for the next three months with them sparring everyday and Gai adding ten more pounds every week. Naruto's strength was stronger than Lee's. He could take down a tree if he wanted with enough effort.

He bought a nice three floor house near the river in Konoha, not far from the place where the Yondaime Hokage used to live but even bigger then the former Hokage's house. 7 Bedrooms, a bathroom on each room and one extra in the halls of each floor.

At the end of there training Gai told him to meet the Hokage the next day after lunch and offered him a green Sissy suit that he took to a tailor and had them cut it off, waist down and turn it black with words "KING" in white on his chest.

During those three months he went shopping to the shinobi stores that are owned by retired shinobi and had to order to get his kind of clothes. Because they didn't have his jeans pants and loose clothes.

A week after he the training began, he got a call from Dre.


Naruto picked up his phone and began dialling Dre's personnel phone number. He wanted to know about "A King's Freedom"'s status so he was like an eager little kid.


"Yo Dre, it's King"

"Hey kid, i was wondering why ain't call sooner"

"Enough small talk man, tell me what with the album"

"Well let's see, we sold it for 11.50$ and in your first week, so you sold..."

Naruto had a tick on his forehead.


"N.K., in your first week, A King's Freedom sold over 300 000 albums world wide, congrats!"

"Holy Shit! For real?"

"Yeah" Dre's voice was heard in the background. "Yeah? Alright, tell him i'm on the way"

"Ayyio kid, listen, i gotta go, but we'll talk soon, peace kid"

"Peace boss"

(Flashback Call End)

The Next Day

He woke up to a knock on the door and when he opened it he saw the two woman who somehow made him fall in love them BOTH and blushed but when looked behind them he saw three children that were he guessed two or three years old with his color of hair two boys and a girl and led them in.

The woman that he first fell in live with had the two boys and had dark purple that fell to her mid back with black eyes and her name was Fuka she was 22 years old.

The other woman Makie had very dark and long blue hair that went to her legs with blue eyes to match and she was 21 years old and she had the girl.

Fuka's boys all had his hair color and spikiness (spelling?) they all had his tan skin color but only one had his eyes the oldest and youngest had black eyes but for some reason, they all looked like him. The oldest boy was Naruto Jr. and he had a bad feeling about that but also a very good feeling. The younger boy's name was Arashi.

Makie's girl had his hair colour and his dark blue eyes and her name was Keisei.

While they were talking Naruto asked them who the lucky guys were and the girls stared at each other before saying "their yours Naruto-kun" so Naruto looked at them then the children who were sleeping and did what any other man would do...he fainted.

Well hope you liked it people and three kids right there (that's what i meant by potent and if you don't know what it means then i say too bad)

So tell me whether or not this is better than the original.

Next chapter preview

Naruto picked up his phone.


"YO King?"

"Yeah, who dis?"

"It's the Doctor"

"Yo boss, hows is going?"

"Shit's going great kid, your tracks soundin crazy. You broke history you little muthafucka."

"For real? How i do?"

"In your first three months, "A King's Freedom" sold over 4.46 million albums world wide and you got a few nomination at the Grammy awards in three months, they're gonna send you the time and address, cool?"

"Holy shit!, i went 4x platinum in my first few months?, i'll bee there for the awards no prob, but i doubt i'ma win anything, Peace Dre"

"Don't doubt yourself, see ya Kid"

Preview End

Well Peace.

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