I have already gotten a ton of messages in my inbox, complaining about Chapter 3 ending.
They were along the lines of the ending does not make sense, that excuse does not really justify her leaving, and so on.
So I reread the chapter and you know what? I agree, though there are many others who still liked it.
Like I said, I have no idea where I am going with this story. I am just making it up as I go along.
I am leaving two endings for you guys to decide on.
1) "Edward, I am getting married. I would love for my best friend to come to my wedding."
2) "Edward, I am dying. I only have six months to live."
The second one probably fits more into the story. It makes sense for her to suddenly come back.
Yes, I know the two are heading in two completely opposite directions. That is why I need some feedback. Do not be afraid to tell me what you guys really think. Criticism is welcome.
Thanks. XOXO :)