17Hi it's me with a new story! I have no idea if you will like but I will need help. Since its my first Naruto story I have no idea if it will be authentic and good or not. This story is also a crossover but just mentions them.
I don't own Naruto or anything else that is a big corp.-embermoonlight
Talking
Thinking
Demons Talking
?POV
As I walked into Konoha's gates I put my hood over my face. I had made this cloak for times such as now, it covered my entire 10 year old body head to toe as well as my arms and with my hood up most of my face it had a strange zipper as well as a small chain(if you don't know by now its organization XIII's cloak) . It was night time so no one paid me any mind I was walking calmly down a street till I heard some shouting, get curious I ran to the source and was shocked at what I saw. A boy about my age with spiky blond hair sharp blue eyes and 3 strange birthmarks on each side of his face. What shocked me was that a group of angry drunk villagers surrounded him wielding broken bottles among other common objects hitting the boy and calling him demon brat and other things.
That's it. I thought to my self as I got out my chalkrams(is that spelled right? Its Axel's weapons) out.
"Hey you why don't you move along and leave him alone and nobody gets hurt." I said in a dangerous voice as I got closer to the villagers twirling the two red and white chalkrams in my hands.
Sadly for them they didn't listen. "Little girl why don't you go home and let us finish this demon off." one stupid villager said to me. That was it with a angry cry I charged at them and attacked them. I knew now who this boy was he is the jailer for the nine tailed fox. I knew this because I have the ten tailed fox not the ten tailed demon. Sad to say for them that made the boy my brother and no one and I mean no one hurts my family. The only good news those villagers had was that I didn't want to kill them.
"Who are you." the boy asked me very scared. I made my chalkrams disappear in a flash of darkness.
"I am a friend you may call me Jackie and I am hear to help you, whats your name?" I told him as I held out a gloved hand and helped him up.
"My names Naruto Uzumaki the future Hokage!" Naruto told me happily.
"Well Naruto I am going to help you become a very strong ninja would you like that?" I asked smiling under neath my hood.
"Wow you really mean it?" Naruto asked me and smiled again when I nodded back.
"But I have some conditions you must follow." I told him as I smirked I needed some things in the future to happen, yes I could see the future but more on my powers latter.
"Aww, what are they?" Naruto whined, making a face.
"One I will be living with you, two you never tell anyone about me and your training or better yet nothing about me, and three you must not use your training until you have become a genin." I told him as we both walked out of the ally.
"Darn I wanted to show off to Sasuke." Naruto sulked to me. After a long talk Naruto agreed, and I planed to make him into a excellent ninja. After I got to his apartment I was appalled by the state of the place.
"Naruto why do you live here?" I asked him softly trying to control my anger as we walked into his apartment which was in a worse state I didn't think it could get any worse.
"They wont let me live any where else." Naruto said to me sadly.
"I want you to tell me how they treat you, is it always like this?" I asked him hoping he would say no but knew I was right. Sadly, I was correct I was disgusted with the villagers but knew it wasn't there fault they were blinded by grief and anger. In return I told him about how my village treated me and how I was a traveler and also about what he had inside him and how it wasn't him and who his parents were.
"So the forth hokage is my dad?" Naruto asked me in shock.
"Yes he is, the reason they probably didn't tell you was that your father made many enemies and would come after you if they knew about you." I said we had been talking for a while and I knew we should go to bed soon.
"Uh one more question, how do you know I have the nine tails sealed inside of me?" Naruto asked me yawning.
"Well I have the ten tailed fox which is the older sister of yours. Now get some sleep I am going to train you after school tomorrow." I told him and made sure to clean this place up and give him the childhood he deserved.
Yay, new story! Tell me what you think!-embermoonlight.