56I am so sorry about taking forever to update! I had college, selling a horse,job hunting and apartment hunting all on my hands for the past months. Still have the horse and an online class and no job but I do have a new apartment for August. Hopefully I will be able to write more often. I realized how annoying it is to be in love with a story and then having to wait for the next chapter for months. I know I have lost a lot of followers but maybe you all can share this story with your friends and readers on here so maybe more will read.
Reviews are really what keep me wanting to update. I only got 2 reviews on the last chapter, one was from a very faithful reader, it's too bad that only two people reviewed but thank you so much to the two that did, it means a lot. Please review! I do consider your thoughts and ideas so feel free to share often.
I got a pm from someone who commented on the fact that the cullens were treating jacob badly and that if jake really wanted to he could find ways of seeing ness. In response to that, Bella and Edward didn't forbid him from seeing her, he just didn't anymore because she was more fixated on Bennett and then Jake became chief of the tribe and had less free time. As you recall when Ness was little, her and Bennett were very close but when he left she was very very upset, and spent most of her time crying and asking for Bennett, Jacob grew sick of trying to get her attention after quite a while. This person also said the cullens were not being cullens because they were being ungrateful. I do not see how they were being ungrateful, they were trying to be nice but for Bella and Edward their daughter comes first. They are very wrapped around her fingers and will do whatever is best for her. And in this story Mate tops imprinting.
Sorry for all that, I just wanted to try to clear things up a little. Please recommend this story to others and please review. Keep up with the baby names, it's getting closer!
Ch14
October 20th
All day I waited excitedly for night to come so I could see Ben again because I never got to really talk to him last night after I told him what happened earlier. It was about 11 at night; my parents had gone out on a short hunting trip. I was lying in bed reading my book when Ben came through the window.
"Ren!" He exclaimed as he jumped on the bed to tackle me with kisses.
"Ben, stop it you're going to make me pee my pants." I said giggling from all the sloppy kisses he was plastering all over my face and neck.
"Well we wouldn't want that would we?" He said as he rolled over onto his side so he was facing me, I did the same.
"How was your day?" I asked as grabbed his hand so I could play with his finger.
"It was nice. Dad bought me a car." He replied casually.
"Really?" I questioned excitedly, sitting up.
"Yep. He bought me a new jaguar, its midnight blue. Mom taught me how to tune it up and now it is upgraded so its way faster and quieter." He explained with a huge smile that made his dimples pop, I love those dimples.
"A Jaguar, nice! I hope dad gets me a good car, not a Volvo. I'm so sick of the Volvo. If Mom has any say I will probably end up with a gross old pickup truck like she had." I joked as he rolled to his back and pulled me back down so I was tucked into his side.
"Too bad we can't drive yet. We still have a few more months." I sighed.
"If I could drive, I would drive here to see you." He said, kissing my head.
"I love you Bennett." I told him, raising my head so I could see his face.
"I love you too Renesemee. I will always love you honey." He said before kissing me.
We talked and made out for a little while longer before I fell asleep in his arms.
The next morning I woke up to my empty bed but found a note lying on Bennett's pillow.
Ren,
I tried to stay as long as I could but mom would start to get suspicious if I stayed any longer, so I'm going to go but I will be back tomorrow.
Have a good day and please don't worry about your control. You are a lot stronger than you think. I love you always.
Love,
Bennett
"I love you too" I whispered before tucking the note into the drawer in my nightstand with the rest of his notes and letter.
I proceeded to take a shower, get dressed and head downstairs to find some breakfast. I walked into the kitchen, still a little groggy, to find my father.
"Good morning Renesemee" Dad greeted me as I walked in.
My morning smoothie of blood, juice and some vitamins and mineral supplements was waiting on the table for me along with a plate of scrambled eggs. Most of the time mom or dad will make breakfast for me every morning but what was sitting beside my plate was something I was not expecting.
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