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Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.- Edgar Allan Poe
Soul-
"Marco" I shouted into the neverend garden filled with over a million types of flowers. I lifted one of the many flower bushes in hopes to find the missing person I was desperately trying to find.
"Marco" I shouted again, but lounder than normal, causing me to slightly hurt my throat, my sesitive ears picked up a faint 'Polo' that seemed to come from the other end of the garden. I ran as fast as my small legs could. As I reached the end of the garden I ran circles trying to find him,the pain suddenly hit me, a light sweat lingred on my forehead, I doubled over panting trying to get back the air I lost.
I looked up to try and find my missing uncle and brother, but everything was fuzzy. The once beautiful flowers tured gray and wilted, the sunny cloudless sky now gray and misrubly "Your not strong enough Soul" twin voices boomed form behind me, I turned my head disputed my instincs telling me not to. Out of fear I turned my whole body shaking, I could see my breath forming shapes in front of my face.
As I finally came face-to-face with the people who had addressed me earlier. The two figures towerd over me, both wearing body length hodded cloak that would put the grim reaper to shame, one of the enormous had their arms crossed tho other had his arm stretched out in my direction, just able to see their index finger pointing at me. I turned to run but I found my exit blocked with the tame rose bushes, now wild and disfigured, each rose gray and dead, their gray petals fell to floor tears which I can't answer. I glanced back to the figures who were slowy make their way towards me, l looked uo at the wall the rose bush had created, it was to tall for me to clime, I could run through but the mutated roses caused the thornes to incrase with size and oozing with a thick purple goo, I was corned in the garden that held many of my happy child hood memories, I curled suffled as far as I could go the thorns from the roses digging into my back.
"Look dear" A mocking, female voice boomed "He's scared of us" A Laugh came from her, sounding like a witches cackle.
"Why should he scared of us" The male voice said in the same mocking voice as the one before.
The female voice spoke again but this time in a kind, tender voice"Soul baby, look at us" I snapped my eyes open, they know my .
"Look at us" The male voice commanded. I removed my head from my hands. My face went pale, I stopped breathing, my limbs froze, the two grinning figures stood there pround and tall, everything abouth them was mocking me, the two people I hated the most; My mother and father. I screamed
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SLAP!
I was awoken from my nightmear with a hard slap across my right cheek. My blury vision cleared to find my brother standing over me with a consered look plasted on his face.
"Soul are you alright" His voice croaky due to the fact he just woken on the blow up airbed positioned on the side of my bed, his tired heavy red eyes look me up and down "Well"? he asked "Yeah, im fine" I raised my hand to my tender cheek "But you Hit hard" He laughed at my comment.
Slicence fell berween us, both of unsure of what move to make next. I looked out the coner of my eye, even though he hadnt changed much in apperance, he had grown alot in the way he acted, He sat up straight, spoke in a proper way, dressed in the correct way; Heck even hands, his long thin fingers curled around one another, his fair fair-skinned hands had not a single mark on them, he was the perfect example of a Evans.
I Frowned and looked at my hands, my long thin fingers covered in scars due to fights with kishins and Maka, even though I spent alot of time in the sun I hardly tan -My brother and father suffer from this to- and I dont act like I was a heir to a million pound family, I dont speek or act like I was rich, I am the complete opposite of my brother. I was a disgrace to the Evans name. But I remember when younger all I ever wanted to be was like my father and Wes.
"Hey Wes" my older brother loked at me and gave me a kind brotherly smile "Yeah, Soul"
I returned his smile, flashing him my shark like teeth
"Do you remember when we were kids" I tried my best to hold back a smirk, but I could'nt
" Us two running around like comple lunitics and causeing mother and father problems" He gave out a small laugh, tring not to wake the sleeping girl in the next room
"Yeah it was fun when we were younger running around that huge house" I laughed remebering when we used to do that "Or exploring the garden" Our laughing grew lounder. By the time we finshed laughing and recalling memories we were both sprawled out on my bed trying to regain our breath, we were both to buzy laughing to notice that the hall light had been turned on and my bedroom door opened illuminating everything that the dim light touched, we only noticed this when a furry purple ball hopped up on to the bed, this caught both of our attentions.
The purple ball began to move to reveal two glowing amber eyes that would make the most precious ember jews jelouse of being in the same room as her eyes. Her eyes dartedback and forth from me to Wes and finally landed on me and gave me a seductive grin and fluttered her eyelashes
"So, Soul are you going to tell me who your cute friend is"? She asking in a flirtatious voice. Before I had a chance to responde Wes had retreted to the edge of the bed and lost all colour in his face.
"Y-you have a c-cat that t-talks" He stumbled over his words
I gave him my signicher lopsided grin.
"This is Blair and she not really a cat" Blairs ears perked up and she hopped onto my lap and sat down
"Soul, Soul, Soul" She gave me a smug grin "Do you ever listen, I am a cat with a ridiculous amount of magical power, Dont you remember I told you that the first time I met you"
"And i-it I mean she has p-powers too"
"Your not very good at this are you soul" A new voice commented on my attempt to assure to Wes that blair was not threat to anyone, unless you call nosebleeds a threat. I turned my head to see who it was, eventhough I knew that voice as if it were my own.
"Hey Maka, what are you doing up" I attempted to turn around without waking up the sleeping cat who was currently sleeping on my lap because cool guys do wake up girls; be it a cat or not.
Maka skipped over to me and gave me that cute smile she only gives me, Only me
"Well lets see" She put her finger to her chin "Lets see well first I woke to someone screaming but it only happend for a second so I brushed it off then I rewoken to the sound of laughter" she eyed up me and Wes
"Ooo Sorry" Me and wes said at the same time, acting like a little boys. She gave me that smile again causeing some blood to rush to my face and butterfly to flutter alive in my stomach, It tried to push that feeling away but I couldnt and the feeing actualy felt abit good.
"So what were you two doing before I came in"
Wes sat up propaly still unsure of the snoozing cat that was sleeing on me.
"We were talking about when we were kids" Maka looked at me obviously confused.
"I thought you didnt like your childhood"
I scratched the back of my neck, unsure of my answer "Well yes and no" I looked at my brother who was curious of the answer too "Well there were some times wher me and my pearants had some fun times, but most of the time they would be too buzy or it was too late and me and Wes were'nt alound to play with kid who came from a non-rich family so my only real friend when I was younger was Wes" I looked up at Maka who had a look of shock and disgust, I would'nt blame her "So I did have some good times with my mother and father, but i mostly had fun times when I was with you Wes" I mumbled the last part hopeing that neither of them heard, Sadly i was wrong when Wes storng arms wrapped around me in a hug and preventing me escaping
"Soul im so sorry you should have told me sooner" He hugged me tighter until we heard something.
"MEOW" we both looked down to she a squished blair "Usually Blair does'nt mind being between to men but this is'nt funny" Wes let go off me and me, Maka and Wes staired at the periwinkle kitty who was fighting for her consciousness.
Without warning Maka scooped Blair into her arms, her arm brushed against my led causeing me to blush again,
"We better get some sleep" Maka whispered and ran out of my room leaving me a scarlet red
"You like her dont you" I Jumped forgeting that my older brother was currently still in the room and tucked up in the blow up air bed.
"What"! I wispered asloud as I could in a confused tone of voice
My elder brother smirked at me and threw on of the many pillows scattered on the floor at me, hitting me square in the face.
"I know you Soul, im your older brother and you like her" I growled at him and threw the pillow at him, hitting him in the face "Do not" I mumbled at him
He smiled and began to get comfortable in his 'bed'
"Deny it as much as you want you like her and you'll have to face the fact sooner or later"and her turned over so his back was facing me, his body being illuminated by the moon. I was about to shout at him but he got there first
"And she likes you too"
I closed my mouth and just sat like that for about 2 minuets before I laid down think about what just happend. Maka likes me, I scoffed at that idea, she would probley like someone who has a brain like; Kid or Ox, not me, im her hardheaded, easy going, piano playing wepon she would never go for a guy like me but when I am talking to another girl in school she does get abit defensive. And whn she talks to other guy I do get a bit jealous and does have a cute smile and the only resonI call her 'Tiny-tits' is just so I can talk to her. My eyes widend and blood went cold and I couldnt beathe. I like Maka, It made sence, but what do I do? Do I Tell her, Keep it to myself?
I started taking deep breaths to calm me down.
I Like Maka.
Its 2:17 in the fucking moring and my minds tells me now to tell me I have a crush on Maka, I rolled onto my side and staired out the window
I Like Maka and maby she likes me
Moments later I let sleep carry me away.
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Unknown-
Glowing crystal ball in front showed me showed the home of a pair of student from the DWMA. The sound of high heels filled my ears I looked up to see a girl in her early twenties walking down the hall. Her long blond curly hair was tied up in low pigtails so her long hair reached the end of her back and on top of her head sat a black bow. She was wearing medium length black flowy skirt, an orange blouse over that was a black waist coat with orange designs embroidered on to it. Over-all she looked pretty good, but just because she looks sweet an innocent does not mean it, she is one of the most powerful witches.
she stopped right infrount of me "I followed your orders master"she bowed and brought a suitcase out and place it on the floor
"I killed Henry Evans and finlicted Soul Evans nightmears with concentrated madness" she began to open the suitcast, I could pracicaly see the glowing light radiate from it, I liked my lips in anticipation
"And I stole the artifact from the hidden volt" I rushed over to her side in exictment and looked over her sholder as she fully opend the suit case, showing the full glory of the artifact
I bit my lip, drawing blood.I closed it and picked it being as careful as I could "You have done very good Shiyomi"
I heard her gasp and a squeal at the same time "Thankyou master"
I reached my set and sat down to closer examen the artifact. I looked up to find her doing her 'happy dance',
"I mean it you did good Shiyomi" She looked at me showing off her oranger eyes
"I live only to please and serve my master" She turned on her heals and walk off
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