62A/N I received a very opinionated review from 'The Moose' who forced me to revise my description chapter (well made me rethink what I wrote) Anyway, Moose if you reading this your response is down below. The whole fast forwarding thing is done, at least for now. I just really wanted Cas in it! I love him :) NO WTF'S? How sad.
P.S I'd just like to share that a spider attacked my face when I was writing this chapter! I am under attack! EVIL BUG APOCALYPSE! Where's Sam, Dean and Cas? SAVE ME!
Disclaimer: Anything Supernatural is not mine. Anything Mer, Piper or Aiden and other OC is. They are my characters unless otherwise stated. Pictures are on photobucket and the link is on my profile.
P.S THANKS SO MUCH EVERYONE that favourited/alerted/read/reviewed.
34 reviews! WOW! Love you guys :)
Pickle Paige – Interesting theory, we'll see if it's correct. I hope it made since about Chris I mean...I already know his storyline...got everything pretty much figured out...might be a little surprising.
The Moose – Can I call you Moosey? Nah probs not right? You don't sound like you enjoy me very much. Oh well I guess this story isn't your cup of tea ;) anywho thanks for the great advice, you come barring a great argument but I have one too.
I love sisfics, it was only going to be two sisters and Adam but I added in Aiden cuz it seemed poor Adam would be left out. Juggling characters is what I do (no headache for me) I do it in many of my stories, I LOVE CHARACTERS. Intersecting plot lines is how you make a story...in case you were wondering, and yes it may seem fast but its actually not.
I only hit the fast forward button on Cas and him saving Mer, the apocalypse isn't for a while yet so chill its all good...it's at normal rate for now and actually I was six chapters in but I was always planning in bringing Cas in early and he fit with that chapter so I ran with it.
Perhaps you think I'm moving too fast for you but you have no idea what I'm planning, speaking of, I revised my description page just for you, check it out if you think it might help (I don't even know if you're reading this...)
As for caring about my characters if you read the other people's reviews then you would know they seem to care, just because everything's a mystery right now does not make you care any less. I've read stories with less background then this and still cared about characters.
The characters will shine over time in my story, you will find out things about them along the way! That's how a story generally goes, you don't just tell everybody everything all at once then there'd be nothing left to share.
I listened to your advice and I enjoyed it except for the whole 'Slow this story the fsck down' I can only assume you misspelled the f-bomb. I will not be re-writing the story at this point, I've gotten far and would not like to change that many things so yeah...
As for the Impala question its John Winchester for goodness sakes, he would have just shoved 'em in the car and dropped 'em off at Bobby's, Pastor Jim's or wherever, Besides Mer could drive at the age of 12.
Thank you for your opinion, advice and review...I hope you'll continue reading and give me another chance...perhaps. Frowny face if you don't.
kissacazador – Gotcha, the surprise factor is what I was going for! Yes Mer tries to protect Sam and Dean tries to protect her...that's how they role I guess. Okay I'm confused, where's John going? I don't believe I mentioned him permanently leaving yet (if that's what you mean) he's just out galloping around the country trying to save his daughter who he thinks is still dead. Frankie...he's got a storyline don't you worry and I totally hope sometime soon I can fit Dean kicking his ass in the story...though Dean would most likely get injured due to the fact FRANKLIN IS EVIL AND DEMONIC!
EvilAngelTeamGabe – I like that Cas line too. I like most of his lines. God apparently does have a plan for Mer...lol that was just recent, Cas was always gonna save her but...I changed why. Protective Dean...ah, he's lovely. The hug was blissful. Just thought you should know on mine it says you reviewed three times with the same review :s
Hannarrhh – OMG that's awesome ;) THANK YOU FOR ENJOYING CAS IN THIS CHAPTER! Did you hear that Moosey? Someone liked my chapter with S4 & S5 material in S1; bam, take that. Sorry just had to add that. The plans for the apocalypse are slightly changed...Oh don't worry about Chris he'll get his time to shine...you will be surprised, I think... As always I enjoy your reviews ;)
"The apocalypse." Dean chuckled. "You gotta be kidding me."
Castiel tilted his head in confusion. "I assure you this is no laughing matter." Mer tried not to laugh at his blank face but it was really hard not to.
"What are we supposed to do about the apocalypse angel boy?" Mer demanded.
"What is commanded."
"I am not being Heaven's bitch." Mer snapped.
"You will do as I say."
"I don't think so."
"Mer..." Dean whispered worriedly. Castiel leaned in, looking her directly in the eyes.
"You should show me some respect." Castiel snarled. "I dragged you out of Hell. I can throw you back in." Dean looked at Meredith in fear. She had been in hell and he—he didn't stop it.
Dean pulled Meredith back. "Okay, we get it; you're a bad ass angel."
"I didn't have to save young Meredith; I did it as a favour." Castiel informed looking at Dean.
"What do you want us to do?" Dean asked.
"For you to wait until it's time." Castiel replied. He lifted his hand and Dean fell, unconscious. Meredith stared him down.
"Meredith you know what needs to be done."
"I do." Mer replied.
"You've seen it?"
"I have."
"If you do not stop him, we will."
"I understand."
"Do you know the truth?" Castiel demanded.
"If you're asking me if I know who we are then yes I do." Meredith replied. "And don't worry I will give my answer when the times right."
"You were not meant to be in hell Meredith." Castiel said. "That is another's path. You did well."
"What do I tell them?"
"Nothing." Castiel ordered. "You tell them nothing." A flap of wings and Castiel was gone. Meredith swallowed the lump in her throat, her eyes burning with tears.
She had been in hell for four years...four days dead but four years in hell and it was exactly that—hell. She pushed away the horrid memories and tried to calm herself down.
Meredith knew what she had to do. She had to leave—again but so did Sammy. She had to get him to leave, it wasn't safe anymore.
Meredith stared at Dean for a moment feeling the tears well up in her eyes again. She didn't want to leave him but she had to—to keep this family safe—to stop their future, the future she saw.
Meredith would not let that happen regardless of who got in her way and that included the angel that saved her life.
She walked out of the panic room over to Sam when the doorbell rang. Meredith looked up startled and narrowed her eyes.
Quickly she made her way to up the stairs and too the front door only to find a pretty blonde woman on the other end.
"Who are you?" Meredith demanded.
"Jessica Moore, Sam's girlfriend."
"You're Sam's girlfriend?" Mer asked.
"Yeah, is he here? He told me to come here...who are you?"
"I'm Sam's sister—"
"Oh hi." she smiled.
"—Meredith." Jess's face darken.
"Meredith?"
"Yeah."
"Sam said—he said you died."
"Oh well I—" Jess pulled a gun on her. "—whoa!"
"Where's Sam?" she demanded. Mer raised her hands in surrender.
"Jessica, calm down, please, just put the gun down."
"Where's Sam!" she screamed at Mer, the gun shaking in her hand.
"Downstairs." Meredith replied.
Jessica grabbed Meredith's arm dragging her with her, the gun pointed at her head. They made their way to the basement. Meredith tried to convince Jessica to put the gun down but she wouldn't budge.
"So what are you?" Jess demanded as the headed down the stairs.
"I'm human." Meredith insisted. "I've already told you that."
"Stop lying." She ordered. "You're dead, so what are you a demon, shapeshifter?"
"Is there anything Sam didn't tell you?" Meredith complained.
"Sam!" Jessica dropped the gun rushing down the last three steps. She collapsed down beside him.
"What did you do to him!" she cried looking up at Mer with tears in her eyes.
"Jessica you need to leave now." Meredith ordered.
"What! No I'm not leaving him!"
"I'm not asking you to."
"What are you saying?"
"You need to take Sam and leave."
"What?" Jessica asked confused. "I don't understand."
"His life is in danger."
"In danger from who?"
"Me." Meredith replied. Jess's eyes widened. "Please I don't want anything to happen to my little brother, you need to get him as far away from us as possible."
"Okay." Jessica agreed nodding her head. "Okay."
"Alright let's get him in your car." Meredith said. Jessica looked at get like she was mad.
"Do you know how hard it's going to be to get him up the stairs?" Jess asked. "Why don't we jut wake him up."
"He won't leave then." Meredith insisted.
"Need an extra hand?"
Both girls turned to see Sebastian leaning against the stair railing, swinging Jess's gun in his hands. Jessica jumped up looking frazzled.
"It's okay Jess." Mer assured. "He's a friend."
"Good to see you breathing Mer-bear."
"Don't call me that, you're not my brother."
"No I'm not and thank god for that right?" he smirked.
"Where's my dad?" Mer demanded.
"Busy looking for your little friend."
"Franklin?"
"Yeah and your other friend."
"They aren't my friends."
"Ya sure because you were pretty chummy with them."
"Not now Sebastian." Mer complained.
"How could you make that deal?" Sebastian snapped. "Huh?"
"I did it for my family."
"You're screwed up you know that?"
"Are you going to help us or not?" Jessica demanded interrupting.
"A little snippy isn't she?" Sebastian teased. Meredith gave him an annoyed look. "Alright let's do this."
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Piper opened her eyes holding her head in agony. It felt like she'd been asleep for three days straight.
"What happened?" she whispered to no one in particular.
The last moments of her life passed before her eyes. She jumped up looking around. Bobby was lying a few feet over but no one else was there.
"DEAN!" she yelled. "MER! SAMMY! AIDDY! ADAM!"
She spun around frantic. Someone moaned and she ran towards the noise. Dean was on the floor of the panic room looking lost and confused. She dropped down beside him.
"Dean," she sobbed, "where are they?"
"What?" he asked. "Pip what—"
"Dean they're gone."
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A/N SO mysterious right? Wonder what's going on now? Where are the twins? Where's Mer? Hmm...and who's Sebastian?
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