I've been thinking and… I'm going to give this story another shot. I think I can make it actually work.
But everything that was here before? The old story?
That has to go. I've taken it down. I'm sorry it has to be that way, but for this to work there has to be a clean slate.
Also, there won't be anything here for a while. I'm going to finish up My Little Halo before writing anything else, but in the meantime I'm going to try something I haven't done for any of my other stories. I'm going to plan it out, beginning to hopefully-epic end, to have it ready to write when I free up. I've seen the train-wreck that ensues when I just jump straight into the writing, and I'm not going to do that again.
Thank you all for your patience.