Dieya: Hi there my loyal readers. As you can see, I've rewritten my story NoahAllen. I still wish for someone to help me with the fight seen in my last chapter, and I would love some good ideas about how to start the sequel to this story. So please review and tell all your friends.


NoahAllen Rewritten

Allen sat their in the dark dungeon in a hypnotic state, Timcampy wrestling to get out of the chains. Seals decorated the walls, Allen and Timcampy.

All was Quiet, but then all of a sudden a door came out of nowhere. It was a door that was checkered and shaped sorta like a heart with a crown on top.

"ALLEN," yelled the tomboyish looking girl Road Camelot.

"How could these terrible people do this to you?" she said as she ran hugging Allen and kissing him on the lips softly.

Allen just sat there quiet not even looking at her, wondering what the Noah planned to do.

"Shounen, we're going to take you home now," Tyki Mikk exclaimed walking through the door into Allen's cell, "But you really should be more quiet Road, this is enemy territory."

"I DON'T CARE, so long as I know Allen's safe with me." Road said defiantly looking at Allen for support, but he stared blankly into the distance, "Tyki what's wrong with Allen, he's not saying anything?"

"He's probably just in denial that his so called friends would lock him up and let him die here like an unwanted pet." Tyki answered looking at Allen with concerned eyes.

Road just looked at Allen and thought 'Maybe he'll wake up from this trance when we get him out of here.'

"Let's just get him out of here and worry about this later." Tyki stated while picking up Allen and throwing him over his shoulders.


In the Ark in Allen's new room.

Allen was in his bed waking up with a shrunk Timcampy sitting next to him looking at his master with joy.

'I feel so weird right now, where am I?' Allen thought while groaning groggily.

"Tyki, he's waking up!" a girl's cherub voice said with glee.

"Welcome home, Shounen. Did you have a nice nap." a male's voice said.

As soon as Allen realized where he was, he was pissed and sat up fast. "I said I wasn't apart of your god damn famiā€¦.aaaaaaaAAAAAHHHHHH"

An unbearable pain shot through his head while blood seeped out. Allen fell back instantly curling into a ball from pain.

"Well lad, you won't be saying that for long." Tyki smiled and chuckled darkly as he began to work on Allen's Innocence.


Dieya: Well, there you go. The first rewritten chapter so far. I plan to release the rewritten chapters once a week.

Bye-bye!