Honestly, poems aren't really my thing, but I thought I'd give it a shot. Tell me what you think =) And be honest. Constructive criticism open and compliments are definitely accepted =)

I am an Avox
I am mute

Except not by tongue
But by my cherry lips
Sound is seized
Only my eyes can scream my pain

I have been kissed by a tortured fire
Now I am left to crumble
Abandoned in the eye of the storm
Alone to seep through cracks of touch

I am mute
I am an Avox