Hello, fellow writers!
I have learned that the most important and hardest part of writing is editing your work. So I've decided to come back and edit this story, since it had the most reviews/followers/favorites. So if you go to my stories, I assume you will see a story called "The Lost Snow ~ Edited Edition". That is the edited story.
Thank you for so much support. I hope you will be happy with the better version of The Lost Snow.