Hello and sorry that this is another Author Note
I Read some guides and actually talked with someone other than my brother about this story and they finally managed to tuck it to my head.
the introduction of this story just doesn't work.
It's too fast. straight action. No time to get a feel of the characters.
So I have started to write... better prologue.
So you'd get better feel at me, or should I say avatar of me, the main protagonist of this story.
Protagonist but not the hero, as Shepard is THE hero of Mass Effect.
but for now, I'm a bit busy in RL .
so...it might be awhile before I actually publish the edited chapters...