13The New Student
Hi people! So… this is my FIRST and NEW story :D so I hope you're able to review and give me advice about my story and it's a InuYasha and Shugo Chara crossover! Flames allowed! So here is the first chapter of… THE NEW STUDENT!
"Wake up, Kagome-chan!" a small, child-like voice screamed out. A small hand shot out of the bed sheets and lightly smacked away the chara. "Leave me alone Yuki" a voice grumbled. Yuki, one of Kagome's charas, huffed out in annoyance. "Why can't the alarm clock just go on?!" Yuki screamed, tiny hands forming into fists. As if the alarm clock heard the chara, it started ringing. A small body shot out of the bed, and threw the alarm clock at the wall, smashing it into pieces. "Kagome, that's the 10th alarm clock you smashed this month!" a voice called out from Kagome's room.
Ignoring her aniki, Kagome went out of her bed and took a shower. She put on the uniform and tied her hair up into a high ponytail. She put on a necklace that had 7 little charms (order from left to right), it contained a sword (Tetsusaiga), a boomerang (Hiraikotsu), a sūtra, a green flame, a blood-red fan with blue crescent moons, a green poison whip and a small kitten (Kirara). She then put on a bracelet with a blue crescent moon, signifying that she was a Taisho. Akano, another one of Kagome's charas, nodded in approval. "Come on, let's go." a small and gentle voice called out. The owner of that voice was Sakura, ANOTHER one of Kagome's charas!
Kagome went out of her room and saw her aniki at the table reading a newspaper. She kissed his cheek. "Good morning aniki" "Good morning imouto." They both greeted each other. Kagome ate bacon and eggs for breakfast. "Come imouto, we have to go now." Kagome went inside the limo, considering her aniki is a rich businessman, and went off to Seiyou Academy.
GUESS WHO KAGGY'S ANIKI IS!-
And please, please tell me your opinion of this first chapter! Be blunt with it! Even though it's mean! And I hope I didn't make it sound like Kagome and her aniki aren't close. They are.
And updates might be a bit slow… sorry!