Ok, so I've changed a few things with the story. Have a new beta but I think I would like a second one...no offense to Julie, she did a wonderful job and caught several things for me, but I'd like a second opinion on a couple things I'm having trouble with. Namely chapter 4's beginning. So anyone want to help beta?
How to Defend Yourself Without a Wand by Morrolan
TV » Highlander Rated: K+, English, Words: 5k+, Favs: 8, Follows: 11, Published: 8/5/2002 Updated: 7/3/2004}
52 Chapter 5: Notice