AUTHOR'S NOTE:

This, while my third time publishing a poem.

I would appreciate constructive criticism but this is kind of in vain, since people rarely read poetry on this site.

Ok, those rare few gems of readers, you can pretend that it's Draco's POV or even Harry's.

And, by the way, I've absolutely no training or specific education on poetic structure or anything like that, so if it 'doth not rhyme', see if I care! :-)

Read, Read, Re-read, and review!

All authors love reviews, even one-worded reviews!

**Kate**

p.S: R&R

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Too Far

My heart thrummed

The world swirled

My body stiffenned

Felt a feather-like touch

A warmth inside me

My eyes teared up

Your presence so strong

My knees weak

My hands trembled

They shook as they moved

Trying to reach you

You were too far

Not even near

It had been an illusion

I missed you so

Since so long

I fell on the cold granite

Sobbing helplessly

Wishing for you

Praying desperately

But you were so far,

Too far

To hear me,

My cries

To see me,

My tears

You were too far.

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Author's Note:

Was it any good?

Did someone, anyone(Woo-hoo, anyone there?!), like it?

Review and let me know!

Oh, and flames are great for marshmallows, which I love by the way!

So, flamers, do your best!

**Kate**

p.S: ... Uhh, review?