I'm so very, very sorry, but I have to call a mulligan yet again.
After writing these two chapters, the path of the story was beginning to come clear to me, and I have realized that while I have given a butt-load of thoughts to the Zerg, I have given very little thought to the culture of Luminous. The result was that Luminous was barely civilized, and the story is not as rich as it could be.
I am very sorry. I promised that this will be the last time I restart the Zerg Swarm.
The new chapter 1 and 2 will be uploaded in a few weeks. I promise that it will be worth it. Until then, I will leave these chapters up.
Please don't lose your patient in me. Writing is torture and you guys are the only thing making it worthwhile.