Hello! Welcome to my Disney's The Little Mermaid fanfic. This story was requested by daniellm. If you want to skip to the story, go ahead, but you'd be missing out on some important information about this story.

I wrote a lot, and I mean a lot, of twists. Perhaps 60-70% of it, but it does go very much in line to the plot she gave me. So in this particular chapter, I am going to give you the original plot. Read, compare, review and tell me what you think. As I put in twists, she gave me new ideas of where to go on what I left off on. But to make it the way it is, I had to spin it into this certain shape. Please read and review!

Here's the original plot from daniellm:

Ariel decides to go down to see Eric and Grimsby introduces her to Vanessa and she sees the necklace and tries to grab it, but Grimsby pulls her away and she points to Grimsby about the necklace. Grimsby tells her that Eric and Vanessa are getting married and there is nothing that can be done. Grimsby takes Ariel back to her room, but on the way, Ariel runs back and grabs the necklace, but Vanessa pushes her and Ariel falls on the stairs and hurts her head and the necklace falls from her hand, brakes, and her voice returns. Eric comes out of the spell and asks what happened.

Vanessa/Ursula tells him to enjoy his time with Ariel because at sunset she would be hers. Ursula breaks a window and turns herself into some kind of bird. Eric goes to window. He turns and sees Grimsby with Ariel who is laying on the floor not moving. Eric picks her up and takes to her room. Eric pulls a chair up and holds her hand and asks her to wake up and tells her he's sorry and he kisses her.

Some time later (around noon) he is looking out the window. He hears the bed sheets moving and Ariel begins to wake up. Eric goes over to her and tells her that he's glad that she is awake and asks who that lady was that changed herself into a bird. Ariel who still doesn't know that her voice is back starts to cry and Eric hugs her and he kisses her again and he tells her that nothing will happen to her. He tells her that he lost the girl who resuced him and he's not going to lose Ariel. He goes to the window. Ariel looks at Eric then at Sebastian who knows that they kissed. He whispers to her that she has her voice back and she smiles and begins to sing Part of Your World again.

Of course, I had to fix the misspellings and correct the grammar. After all, not being careful does that. (I can't say I'm that good at grammar. I'm not sure, because I've been told I wasn't.

Anyway, enough with the babbling. You can read the story now.