Hi people. I'm new here and I don't think I'm good with fanfictions so... please be nice to me and give me your complete honest opinion, ok?
Rain poured down on her. She stayed on her knees, holding her shoulder tightly. Red fluid trickled down her arms and amplified by the rain. A girl lay in front of her, motionless. A puddle of red fluid was underneath her, getting wider from the rain. She couldn't handle it and yelled toward the sky.
She woke up with a jolt. She had wavy brunette hair that went halfway down her back with eyes the mix of hazel and dark brown. Her skin was tan and something kept moving on her head that seems hidden in her messy hair. She looked at her trembling hands that wouldn't stop shaking while tear, beads of sweat falling from her head. Her brunette hair drenched in sweat and her hazel eyes enlarged from fear.
'I can't take this anymore,' she thought and started to cry silently on her bed.
Ace was dodging an a gunshot that was aimed at him and sent a laser blast at the attacker as he vanished into the air. This process continued every time he defeated an attacker.
"Simulation over," a robotic female voice announced before the other attackers could do anything and disappeared into the air. He walked out of the simulator while wiping off sweat with a dry towel.
"You did great, Ace. As usual," Tech complimented while recording everything into the system.
"Tanks, Tech. You should try being part of it than just standing behind it."
"I'm fine like this. I needed you to try out the new program and updates I installed."
"Why didn't you call Duck for dat? He would have been a great test subject."
"Yeah but he wouldn't really take this seriously." Ace nodded in agreement while Rev zipped over to the simulator at his usual top speed.
"Hey-guys-Zadavia-needs-us-in-the-conference-room- she-said-she-needed-to-tell-us-something-important ," he announced and zipped off to tell the rest.
"Another mission?" Ace asked Tech.
"Who knows. Maybe she has something important to say to us."
"Loonatics. I have something important to tell you all," Zadavia announced to them when everyone sat down.
"What's the news, Zadavia?" Lexi asked.
"Your promoting me into being leader, aren't you?" Duck suggested haughtily. Everyone rolled their eyes at his statement and looked toward Zadavia's hologram.
"No, Duck. This is more important than that. Remember when I was able to find you all when the meteor hit?" Zadavia noted to them.
"Yeah. We were emanating lots of radiation from our bodies because of the meteor," Tech replied/explained.
"Exactly right, Tech. I have found new evidence that there are more citizens in this world that have powers as well." There was silence while the Loonatics were taking all this in.
"Hold on. So, there are more people with powers on the planet?" Lexi asked. Zadavia nodded. "Yes. I hope there'll be some girls to join us."
"Zadavia, do you know how many there are exactly and who they are?" Tech asked.
"There are at least two at the moment and I don't know their gender. It's strange how they didn't come up when the meteor first hit. Now they show up once in a while in my radar."
"Once in a while?" Ace asked.
"Yes. It's strange though. It's as if they were partly hit by the meteor's power. Their bodies radiate its effects once in a while as if hiding from something. I have the last coordinates of one of the transmits ready for you. The other transmit has changed so much it is hard to coordinate correctly where that person is. I need you to find them before they have any ideas or influence of doing something evil. Zadavia out." and that ended her transmission.
"Alright guys. You heard Zadavia. Tech, I need you to get the coordinates she sent and start tracking down this poisen. You'll take Rev and Duck with you. Da rest of us will help Zadavia figure out the other coordinates. Loonatics, let's jet!"
A girl walked out of the Acme University Psychology building toward a café across the street. She had wavy, chin length, blood-red hair with two shoulder length braids. Her eyes were a mix of hazel and her skin was a light tan with a light natural blush by her nose. She wore a dark green shirt with a long-sleeved, grey shirt underneath; navy jeans;and some black running shoes. She started to walk over to a café but not before a boy came over to her.
"Rosalie! You left this on your desk." He handed her a black notebook. "Um... I've meant to ask you something." Rosalie tilted her head slightly.
"Yes?" she asked.
"Um... would you go out with me?" Rosalie shook her head with her eyes closed.
"I'm sorry but I can't. Don't get me wrong you're a cool guy, but you just aren't my type of guy. We can still be friends and hang out once in a while," she declined softly as to not hurt his feelings much.
'Plus, you would be in danger if you did become my boyfriend,' she thought. "I'm sorry." She walked away quietly without saying word to him at all. 'I can't let anyone know my secret or my true identity...'
Who is this girl to this story(you guys already know)? What is this secret of hers and her true identity? Why have these new after season 2(yes, it's after season 2 -.-)?! Why won't I stop asking these questions?! Tune in next time for more exciting adventures of WORD GIRL! (DARN U LITTLE SISTER, who shall remain nameless, FOR MAKING ME WATCH THAT STUPID SHOW WITH HER! DX)
I 'm sorry if this is all I could come up with at the moment since I have CST(California State Test. Yes, I live in CA.) and I have lots of hw and extra test and many ideas and inspirations in school and stores. Well, plz review my stories sincerely and honestly. It will help me a lot in the future to continue the stories unlike my twin right next to me (I have a twin and a 12 year old sis who is soon turning 13... she likes to watch lil kids shows.)