Wow this is so embarrassing. When I first started to write this story I was so young and inexperienced in the writing world. I can't believe I did this. I don't know what to say except I'm going to absolutely rethink the plot these next few weeks, delete this story, then present you all with a newer more well-written story than this.
I'm also going to keep the characters because I'm still absolutely in love with that fan art.