Sorry, I hadn't had time to go through the other chapters until now, I've been busy with my other story, It's called "The road trip" check it out if you want to. Anyway I have fixed a couple of things about the chapters, but only small stuff.

THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH everyone who has read and reviewed this story, you have no idea how glad it makes me! I hope that you have enjoyed my short little story and that you were able to look past my bad English;)